Victim of love

Victim of love

A Poem by Fran Marie

 

I'm running as fast as i can
straight into the arms of another man
then maybe you might understand
just how bad you mistreated me
 
I'm leaving you cry in the dark
for a change,so many times
I have cried love's lonely tears
you have grown more distant day by day
and that's why I'm on my way
 
I really believed in you and your
spoken words of Love~
Promising me the moon
when you couldn't even
 reach the stars


And now I see how you are
Full of deception, deceit and lies
that only proved to put
 empty dreams in my eyes
 
Oh I' shall remember
the romance we shared
when stars dance
 and once you cared

 

How  would wake up
 next to you and you
still lost in sleepy-warm dreams~
 I loved watching you
sleep and when you awoke~
 with happy kisses
to greet me a good morning hon

 

then all too soon your warm
kisses turned into hateful words
neither of us talking
 by time day was done
 
Well, Darlin', I can't stay
any longer and be your
Victim of Love, playing the fool

you say stay, yet act another way

It's always mixed signals I get from you


So that's why I'm running away from
certain heartbreak to come
if I remain with you
 


© 2008 Fran Marie



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Oh Wow da ja vue here You have captured the feeling of frustration and loss and finally giving up and leaving
A painful duty to yourself yet one that had to be done!

Posted 8 Months Ago


hi im the moderator of the best sad and emo poems and i read yours and im denyinying it because it was way too awesome for love and love but my contest says emo and sad yours is lovely dovey stuff emo means death okay and blood and gore not rainbows and happly ever after stuff im story but it was still very good

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this one as well, Victim of love sounds really cool, and I loved that sentence.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, simply lovely, I can relate REAL well to this poem. Very inspiring! Great write :D!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm running as fast as i can
straight into the arms of another man
then maybe you might understand
just how bad you mistreated me

I have had this happen to all too many times. Well written :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Promising me the moon
when you couldn't even
reach the stars"

^ i know the feeling!


"And now I see how you are
Full of deception, deceit and lies
that only proved to put
empty dreams in my eyes"

I'm loving this. great way to put it. I can definitely relate.
well written (:

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, Darlin', I can't stay
any longer and be your
Victim of Love, playing the fool
you say stay, yet act another way
It's always mixed signals I get from you

This is a wonderfully penned explanation of the way love sizzles out or goes wrong. Just a series of reactions played off of one another....sad tale of heartbreak.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"It's always mixed signals I get from you".........oh, how I feel that line!!! Great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hummmmm well being on the other end of this write in my own life it did make me laugh in some sense. A very good write.

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this has some funny parts that have me chuckling.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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