Crystal Clear

Crystal Clear

A Poem by Fran Marie



Beyond the core
of man's mortal soul within
breathes in silence
immortality's mind

to know thyself
is as deep as the sea
and measureless
beyond time's boundry line

fathomless, deep
dark mystery's sea of thought
beyond one's core
curious,we must seek

diving inward
to express outward visions
beyond our core
we rise to a universe of crystal skies


© 2009 Fran Marie



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To me, it reminds me of a thought I have very frequently. The idea that humans see themselves from birth to death. Opposed to understanding that the soul itself lives before our birth and after our death. The idea that the universe is unknown, and our soul is the only thing we will ever have the most knowledge about, over any book, idea, person, etc... Almost makes one wonder, why isn't the soul studied? Humans study everything else, except the soul?

Posted 4 Years Ago


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  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

exactly....thanks for the review;



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so fine and neat work....

Posted 3 Years Ago


To me, it reminds me of a thought I have very frequently. The idea that humans see themselves from birth to death. Opposed to understanding that the soul itself lives before our birth and after our death. The idea that the universe is unknown, and our soul is the only thing we will ever have the most knowledge about, over any book, idea, person, etc... Almost makes one wonder, why isn't the soul studied? Humans study everything else, except the soul?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

exactly....thanks for the review;
Very intense imagery and metaphor use! It's great!! that's how a poem about thought and knowing oneself should be:) I like how you associated every thought with a kind of image. I hope that made sense..:P But, great poem! :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


If humans were capable of using their inner workings to their full potential, I'd probably be afraid of living. A very intriguing write. Your rhythm was done magnificently. ^_~

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like the tones and flow...

Posted 5 Years Ago


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wonderful ..as always..

Posted 7 Years Ago


great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


I agree with all other reviews. Elegant, vivid, and deep. Strong, and wonderful. A great poem. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

-Quill

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written. The whole time I had feelings of a dark space, but not evil. More of the dark, secure kind of place. Very dreamlike. The ending was beautiful, and I love the idea of crystal skies. Great imagery there. Good job! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dig this one, Fran. As always, wonderful write.

jkb

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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