Crystal Clear

Crystal Clear

A Poem by Fran Marie



Beyond the core
of man's mortal soul within
breathes in silence
immortality's mind

to know thyself
is as deep as the sea
and measureless
beyond time's boundry line

fathomless, deep
dark mystery's sea of thought
beyond one's core
curious,we must seek

diving inward
to express outward visions
beyond our core
we rise to a universe of crystal skies

© 2009 Fran Marie


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To me, it reminds me of a thought I have very frequently. The idea that humans see themselves from birth to death. Opposed to understanding that the soul itself lives before our birth and after our death. The idea that the universe is unknown, and our soul is the only thing we will ever have the most knowledge about, over any book, idea, person, etc... Almost makes one wonder, why isn't the soul studied? Humans study everything else, except the soul?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

exactly....thanks for the review;



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Transparency personified and then some.. poetry through and through.... Neville:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


"Crystal Clear"
Fran Marie,
"Beyond the core
of man's mortal soul within
breathes in silence
immortality's mind."
I found this to be beautiful. None of us really knows or understands the very life force which makes us tick. It is a mystery. We are too.Just when we may think we understand something about ourselves, that very thing can change or we grow or learn. Just when we may think we know just about everything about a spouse, friend or loved one, we find out their is so much more.
Beautiful writing!
Blessings,
Kathy


Posted 5 Years Ago


so fine and neat work....

Posted 9 Years Ago


To me, it reminds me of a thought I have very frequently. The idea that humans see themselves from birth to death. Opposed to understanding that the soul itself lives before our birth and after our death. The idea that the universe is unknown, and our soul is the only thing we will ever have the most knowledge about, over any book, idea, person, etc... Almost makes one wonder, why isn't the soul studied? Humans study everything else, except the soul?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

exactly....thanks for the review;
Very intense imagery and metaphor use! It's great!! that's how a poem about thought and knowing oneself should be:) I like how you associated every thought with a kind of image. I hope that made sense..:P But, great poem! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


If humans were capable of using their inner workings to their full potential, I'd probably be afraid of living. A very intriguing write. Your rhythm was done magnificently. ^_~

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the tones and flow...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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wonderful ..as always..

Posted 13 Years Ago


great write

Posted 14 Years Ago


I agree with all other reviews. Elegant, vivid, and deep. Strong, and wonderful. A great poem. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

-Quill

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
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Paris, KY



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