Soft Surrender

Soft Surrender

A Poem by Fran Marie


Running towards the darkened sky,
            
   shadows casting sadness upon my face

                 why, oh why,

 are we fighting again?

                 a foolish thing to do,

is it not?


          Hoping to find answers to ease the heartache
                              
                  this agonizing  pain and anger felt

and turn the sharper edge of love's fate

              into soft surrender

of  a sun-filled destiny

             meant for two lovers 

 to share
               

© 2014 Fran Marie


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I like the idea of reconciling differences, becoming a unified couple.The two lovers in your poem come a long way from the first stanza. From bitter fights to selfless unity.

Our lovers are most often our deepest friends and confidants, guardians against the injuries of the world. Your lines "a sun-filled destiny/meant for two lovers/to share" are a great way to describe that union. We are so much more when we overcome the differences in our relationships.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Christian; So much appreciated ..



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awesome job on this very deep love the imagery

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Well hello stranger, glad you stopped by good to see you back at WC..thanks Sean, for reading my po.. read more
Can't make up unless we fall out, without the seasons life would be a dull day, we err we are human.

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

thanks, Frank, so very much;
The stress of a strained relationship can be so hard to deal with. You love, you yearn, always at odds with one another. You've captured a very intimate look inside your heart. Thank you for sharing...

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much
It's never pleasant but fighting is healthy in a relationship I think.
Nothing abusive obviously but airing disagreements...
Enjoyed the read Fran Marie!

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Yes ..always good let out those pent up feelings..tbanks Ana
I like the idea of reconciling differences, becoming a unified couple.The two lovers in your poem come a long way from the first stanza. From bitter fights to selfless unity.

Our lovers are most often our deepest friends and confidants, guardians against the injuries of the world. Your lines "a sun-filled destiny/meant for two lovers/to share" are a great way to describe that union. We are so much more when we overcome the differences in our relationships.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Christian; So much appreciated ..
Now that is just wonderful. I cannot do that - but you do it so well. What a lovely story of love.....turn the sharper edge of love's fate into soft surrender. I sigh, how lovely your poem is. Thank you. Hope I'm doing this right: 800 Members Tag (Poetry 101).

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Many thanks Dale..I so Appriciate..
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Loved this poem, it can relate to real life situations. Well written I enjoyed reading and the picture adds up to it

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jo. Much Appriciated...
I really enjoyed this piece. I also loved the picture which really drew my into the mood of the poem.
Its like you taken what i'm feeling and jotted onto paper. Arguments can be caused by the silliest of thing especially when strong emotions, such as love , are involved. And sometimes we feel like we're fighting, but not fighting for us.

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

thanks so very much, Kristan, I so appreciate it
This is so true. Sometimes a person loves so deep and wonders why it is so hard to just "get along"

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Thanks K.L. so much Appriciated
Why do two people who love one another argue? The question will never be sufficiently answered, will it? Any relationship involves a good bit of compromise...and some are not willing to give at all. While it is foolish, it is part of life....and those who truly love can get past disagreements. So very emotive. Lovely. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

c'est la vie...thanks, Lydia, so very much appreciated..
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

C'est la guerre!

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