Mandolin's Melody

Mandolin's Melody

A Poem by Fran Marie
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`sonnet`

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I'll play thee a sonnet with mandolin

    softly massage your brow of sad sorrow

absorb anguish so that joy may begin

 bringing bright new light into each 'morrow

 

I'll sing thee mandolin's melody

  sweetest songs of love, each note to behold

chasing gray clouds away, too far to see

 kiss thy lips warm, when winter's breath breathes cold


O' hear my love song enchanting this day

  with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

 of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear


          I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

                         mandolin's melody with love so true



    

 





© 2015 Fran Marie



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So Romantic and Elegant
I love Sonnets.


Thank you for sharing
this wonderful piece and for your
kind review and comments left on my page.





O' hear my love song enchanting this day

with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear




I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

mandolin's melody with love so true



blessings. Benita


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

thanks so very much, Benita, so appreciated;
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)



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a beautiful song of love with all the trimmings,lavender boquets,sunlight

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks ..so very much, Appriciated;
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you are welcome
That was beautiful Fran. Can you really play the mandolin? Your words are as sweet as any melody a tune can sing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks so very much,
A very beautiful, tender and romantic love sonnet.
Just exquisite work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much,Tina
Tina Kline

3 Years Ago

You are very very welcome.
A beautiful and romantic sonnet.
I love your Romantic poems Fran Marie, you do this so effortlessly.

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

awh, thanks Ana, so glad you enjoyed, I so appreciate your reviews
So Romantic and Elegant
I love Sonnets.


Thank you for sharing
this wonderful piece and for your
kind review and comments left on my page.





O' hear my love song enchanting this day

with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear




I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

mandolin's melody with love so true



blessings. Benita


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

thanks so very much, Benita, so appreciated;
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
Beautiful sonnet. Exquisite line: " kiss thy lips warm, when winter's breath breathes cold"

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

thanks MomzillaNC,so very much;
MomzillaNC

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Fran, this is really beautiful. Your word choice is excellent in this one. The tone is soft and romantic....the mandolin is definitely the instrument of lovers. Great write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

thanks Star, so much appreciated;
this piece is enchanting...
a mandolin's love song is beautiful...

and playing a sonnet to him would warm his soul....poetry is definitely a bouquet of words.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

thanks Jacob, so very much;
Love it! Beautifully written and such a great choice of words! I truly enjoyed reading it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks so very much;
oooooooh girl!... ok.. gotta stop and take a breath after that... you had my mind dancing with the alliteration and rhymes.. oh yes!.. then you added gorgeous imagery, and sweet, gentle emotion that warms the heart.. this one has a little bit of everything tied up in a romantic melody alright.. amazing as usual. you know I am a fan.. A.W.E.S.O.M.E.

one suggestion.. (just my opinion..)..

" bringing bright new light into each 'morrow".... would switch around "new" in this one.. flows better in my head.. (bringing bright light into each new 'morrow)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks April so very much, I so Appriciate your great reviews on my poetry... Have to keep that line.. read more

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