Mandolin's Melody

Mandolin's Melody

A Poem by Fran Marie
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`sonnet`

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I'll play thee a sonnet with mandolin

    softly massage your brow of sad sorrow

absorb anguish so that joy may begin

 bringing bright new light into each 'morrow

 

I'll sing thee mandolin's melody

  sweetest songs of love, each note to behold

chasing gray clouds away, too far to see

 kiss thy lips warm, when winter's breath breathes cold


O' hear my love song enchanting this day

  with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

 of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear


          I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

                         mandolin's melody with love so true



    

 





© 2015 Fran Marie



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So Romantic and Elegant
I love Sonnets.


Thank you for sharing
this wonderful piece and for your
kind review and comments left on my page.





O' hear my love song enchanting this day

with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear




I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

mandolin's melody with love so true



blessings. Benita


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks so very much, Benita, so appreciated;
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
GothGranny

6 Months Ago

Belated Congratulations on your beauteous sonnet!!!:)



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Soft, tender and kind words led the reader to good places and thoughts.
"I'll sing thee mandolin's melody
sweetest songs of love, each note to behold
chasing gray clouds away, too far to see
kiss thy lips warm, when winter's breath breathes cold"
When the song of love is sang to us. A kind paradise, never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks John, so much appriciate you reviewing my poem
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
I just loved this poem...it has a very unique, old-worldly charm to it. The wording and rhyming are impeccable and done with much elegance. The mandolin is a beautiful instrument and music is a great accompaniment to love. My heartfelt compliments on this unforgettable writing, Fran Marie...

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Many thanks, Divya, so glad you enjoyed this sonnet piece..
DIVYA

3 Years Ago

It was a beautiful read...You are most welcome Fran Marie.
a beautiful song of love with all the trimmings,lavender boquets,sunlight

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks ..so very much, Appriciated;
 wordman

4 Years Ago

you are welcome
That was beautiful Fran. Can you really play the mandolin? Your words are as sweet as any melody a tune can sing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks so very much,
A very beautiful, tender and romantic love sonnet.
Just exquisite work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much,Tina
Tina Kline

4 Years Ago

You are very very welcome.
A beautiful and romantic sonnet.
I love your Romantic poems Fran Marie, you do this so effortlessly.

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

awh, thanks Ana, so glad you enjoyed, I so appreciate your reviews
So Romantic and Elegant
I love Sonnets.


Thank you for sharing
this wonderful piece and for your
kind review and comments left on my page.





O' hear my love song enchanting this day

with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear




I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

mandolin's melody with love so true



blessings. Benita


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks so very much, Benita, so appreciated;
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
GothGranny

6 Months Ago

Belated Congratulations on your beauteous sonnet!!!:)
Beautiful sonnet. Exquisite line: " kiss thy lips warm, when winter's breath breathes cold"

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks MomzillaNC,so very much;
MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Fran, this is really beautiful. Your word choice is excellent in this one. The tone is soft and romantic....the mandolin is definitely the instrument of lovers. Great write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks Star, so much appreciated;
this piece is enchanting...
a mandolin's love song is beautiful...

and playing a sonnet to him would warm his soul....poetry is definitely a bouquet of words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks Jacob, so very much;

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