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Mandolin's Melody

Mandolin's Melody

A Poem by Fran Marie
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`sonnet`

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I'll play thee a sonnet with mandolin

    softly massage your brow of sad sorrow

absorb anguish so that joy may begin

 bringing bright new light into each 'morrow

 

I'll sing thee mandolin's melody

  sweetest songs of love, each note to behold

chasing gray clouds away, too far to see

 kiss thy lips warm, when winter's breath breathes cold


O' hear my love song enchanting this day

  with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

 of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear


          I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

                         mandolin's melody with love so true



    

 





© 2015 Fran Marie



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So Romantic and Elegant
I love Sonnets.


Thank you for sharing
this wonderful piece and for your
kind review and comments left on my page.





O' hear my love song enchanting this day

with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear




I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

mandolin's melody with love so true



blessings. Benita


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks so very much, Benita, so appreciated;
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
GothGranny

6 Months Ago

Belated Congratulations on your beauteous sonnet!!!:)



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Love it! Beautifully written and such a great choice of words! I truly enjoyed reading it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks so very much;
oooooooh girl!... ok.. gotta stop and take a breath after that... you had my mind dancing with the alliteration and rhymes.. oh yes!.. then you added gorgeous imagery, and sweet, gentle emotion that warms the heart.. this one has a little bit of everything tied up in a romantic melody alright.. amazing as usual. you know I am a fan.. A.W.E.S.O.M.E.

one suggestion.. (just my opinion..)..

" bringing bright new light into each 'morrow".... would switch around "new" in this one.. flows better in my head.. (bringing bright light into each new 'morrow)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks April so very much, I so Appriciate your great reviews on my poetry... Have to keep that line.. read more
this flows beautifully, and makes me envious -- not easy to convey emotions within the confines of form.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks K.L, so very much for reading my poetry
A splendiferous sonnet. Each line is like a warm hug. So charming....enchantingly so. Wonderful work, Fran Marie. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks,Lydi, so much Appriciated,
Such a tender and intimate ballad without music… wonderfully written Fran.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks Dale, so very much;
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)

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