seasons of love

a senryu of sorts

Beneath soft moonlight

          

           stars whisper our names in love

                                    summertime romance

Cool air chills the night

        leaves dance to an autumn breeze

                                     we feel love's embrace   

Snowflakes free falling

         white magic blankets the ground

                                     we share winter's warmth

Robins sing spring's  song

           dripping raindrops kiss our lips

                                  and then there is you

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Love does indeed permeate all the seasons. Very nice imagery here; makes you feel the sensations of each season.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John
for reading
much appreciated;

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness Fran! this is so blessed .. your mix of haiku and senryu ... our glorious seasons .. and color changes all combine fluidly for me .. and give us a very soft, deep romantic experience .. pic is phenomenal as well and so well suited .. great job says i! definitely a keeper!
E.
ps. Stunning!

[Fran Marie]

Awhh thanks s o much
E for your kind words
autumnal flavors fill
the air and the warmth
of the season flows
with the slight cool
breeze of love..
a perfect time
of the year imo
my favorite season
for sure..

[Einstein Noodle]

i'm with you on that for sure .. its first hints so invigorating

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful. Love through the seasons. You capture that so well Fran. Your posted image is a perfect match for your words. You can say so much with a bit of brevity. Allows the mind to wander between the lines. Much enjoyed. Keep safe and well my friend. The final one about spring is my favourite, so sensual and full of promise.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

thanks. Chris
the transitional seasons
of spring and autumn
seem to be the most
preferred. IMO I think
we are inspired
to change with them..

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words dear Fran. You create beautiful places and visions with your words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John.. so vey much appreciated 😀

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Glorious just loved this you have a good style

[Fran Marie]

thanks Ms Julie, so very much

[Hogwarts]

I like this a lot :) I especially love the line:
"dripping raindrops kiss our lips"
It paints a beautiful picture and your choice of words is lovely. Great work :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much for reading and the great review..i so appreciat it

[Willard Wells]

Very lovely. Thanks for sharing

[Adam Adams]

Very romantic lullaby you've come up with! Enjoyed the wordplay of words & the seasonal theme of love / romance that's reflecting through your pages beautifully. Nice imagery!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Adams,,so vey much appriciat.

[Valentine]

I really like this one. Love the painting too. They go well together. Valentine

[Fran Marie]

Thanks. Valentine, much appriciatrd..

[Maumil Mehraj]

Such a beautiful and sweet poem about love. Besides writing the poem brilliantly, you also presented it in a charming manner with the picture and font. I was smiling throughout.
Lovely work!
Maumil

[Fran Marie]

Thanks ,Maumil, so very much appriciated..