Love's Symphony~

Love's Symphony~

A Poem by Fran Marie

Come~


 play for me

     softly each key

piano notes light as summer's breeze




  Dance~ 


 among golden flower's fragrance

      we'll sway to love's melody

while the scent of heaven fills the air




  There~


  beneath sun's bright ivory glow

      we shall pledge our love

a forever springtime tune


                    

                               playing love's  symphony





 

© 2015 Fran Marie


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Fran: You are simply a remarkably talented poet. It like I'm inside a dream world, a wonderland sprinkled with soft suttle and light tones of harmony. The title Love's Symphony is certainly befitting and your use of metaphors are brilliant, like your work. I am so thankful to read it. Just beautiful as always. Thank you so very much once again. Dale

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Awhh..thanks so very much, Dale for reading and for your lovely kind reviews..I so appriciate..
Confuser

8 Years Ago

My pleasure Fran!



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blissful imagery in this fine brevity! the metaphors are brilliant! Thank u for sharing this wonderful poetry!

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

thanks Indra ; so very much appreciate it...
Indra Neil

8 Years Ago

u r most welcome!
The last line wrapped this up nicely. Content and layout combined, gave it a soft whimsical tone. I can see a conductor waving her pen to start each phrase. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks mattavelli, so very much glad you enjoyed...
When you find someone who you can sing and dance in harmony with, through life.
That's chemistry. Love this one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Ana so vey much..glad you enjoyed ...
Written ever so softly, sweetly; flowing with the fragrance of flowers ~ 'There~' I enjoy the simplicity yet mastered like a brilliant symphony. Thank you for your entry into the "Picture Poem This" contest and congratulations on your Blue Ribbon.

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Picture-Poem-This/51391/

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks Wichapi, so very much appriciate your review I enjoyed participatomg..
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what a gorgeous and romantic plea. Who could ever say no to this magical invitation? I love your imagination and that beautiful fountain of creative mind that you have. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Tbsnks, moonskittles, so ver much appriciated
I really like it, brilliant :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks. Ashley, so much appriciated
Heavy sigh....how absolutely breathtaking the romance in this one is! The words sway to the rhythm of love, Fran Marie. Love's symphony is ever so sweet. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi, so very much appriciated...
Filled with magical music, soft, beautiful words, heart-warming imagery and lovely thoughts, this poem was a pure delight to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Smiling, sighing.. such a peaceful and contented drift of loving words. Beautiful.. not saying more cos it would spoil the way i feel right now. Sighhhh

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks Emmajoy, so glad you enjoyed..
Love it, I have no idea how to describe it, but I like it. I love the way you wrote it, its short, but you don't need it long to write much. You write in between the lines. So good, great read here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much...Llerah. So very much Appriciated..
Ilerah

8 Years Ago

Glad to help out

Ilerah

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