Mystique

Mystique

A Poem by Fran Marie

 

A magic shimmer
skimmed the mystic river
beneath soft moonlit skies

 

'Twas there I discovered
a mysterious lover
completely spellboumd by his penetrating eyes

 

A man mysterious and quiet
I cannot deny it
Like still waters my love ran deep

 

'Twas love at first sight
That magical starlit night
'Alas these mystic waters now weep

 

As night grew long
into to a new rising dawn
Like a phantom my new love disappeared

 

As if into thin air
yet his presence felt near
His mystique, exciting yet weird

 

That was some time ago
But the mystic river still flows
And my soul remembers it well

 

Perhaps someday the mystery shall unfold
of secrets untold
which the mystic forever holds
but is not yet willing to tell

 


 
© 2008 Fran Marie


 

© 2010 Fran Marie


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This is lovely Fran-- and congrats on your win!

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks Nolo and congrats on your win also my friend
fine story telling in this Fran! very much enjoy the flow and rhyme .. smooth as silk this mystic river ;) sometimes the mystery remains when people come and go seemingly to quickly for the deep emotions felt ... it always leaves me hanging ;)
E.
ps. congrats on the contest win :) its deep as an ocean for sure!

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks E ever so much. I always appreciate your keen insight and thoughts on my poetry..
This was amazing.. great flow... very good read! Thanks for writing it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice rhyme & flow. Good luck with the contest

Posted 7 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

7 Years Ago

Thanks Baby, so 've y much appreciated
wow,great write,no need for me to enter

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

na,but i will vote for you,how many wins do you have ?i have 6 not all first place but you know
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  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Yeah, I. Know, right? Probably around a thousand definitely not all first place..
Think I'm .. read more
 wordman

8 Years Ago

yeah,i see the feed and you get into a lot,but that`s what there for..hell my 6 sounds shy of yours
Oh my god! I love it!!!! That is amazing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow this is great. I felt like I was in a novel that was achingly romantic. Like you meet your lover in a masquerade then he vanishes and you dont know who he is because of his mask. Its haunting and shivering. And It makes me feel like Ive been brushed on the lips by an ice cold rose

Posted 13 Years Ago


Congrats on your great winning poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


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WOW...this is great. I love the rhyme scheam in this poem. Don't know why but it just caught me eye. Great poem! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such a wonderful vision:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on February 11, 2008
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