^ Thunder ^

^ Thunder ^

A Poem by Fran Marie

 

 

 

Whispering your name

      thru~darken stormy night skies

                               echo thunder cries 

© 2008 Fran Marie


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I like this one. Did you mean darken stormy or dark and stormy tho? Both are useable I suppose, but dark and stormy gives me a different feeling - that the night was pitch and lightning split it, than darken stormy does - that the dusk was fading into darkness and the clouds were lowering and threatening.
Hope that helps and isn't too presumptuious.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Congrats a second time on your great winning Haiku!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Congrats on your great winning haiku

Posted 14 Years Ago


Don't just love the smell and sound of a thunder storm?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THanks so much

Posted 16 Years Ago


A wonderful Haiku.....I can almost hear your words crash through my head. A wonderful piece of writing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love haiku! Wish we had more groups for simple haiku here. An excellent work; thank you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one. Did you mean darken stormy or dark and stormy tho? Both are useable I suppose, but dark and stormy gives me a different feeling - that the night was pitch and lightning split it, than darken stormy does - that the dusk was fading into darkness and the clouds were lowering and threatening.
Hope that helps and isn't too presumptuious.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2008
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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