and we danced~

and we danced~

A Poem by Fran Marie
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..contest write. For Blue Rose cafe challenge

"

and i danced..  as if in a hazy dream

    

                                    like a ballerina


amid lilac's heavenly scent, on a sunlit day


                

                                  and there you lie


in a pitch-black room, sad drowning in misery

 

                    and i danced over to your side


come love i whisper gently, take my hand



                                 and there i stood


waiting determined to break your mood


          and the smell of lilacs grew stronger


with an unpleasant odor



                                   and there you died


as i held your hand in mine


        and then in the black room shone a brilliant light


                                     

  and we danced~




                               

                                  



© 2015 Fran Marie



Author's Note

  Fran Marie
Just a dream that seemed so real

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'.. sad drowning in misery - and i danced over to your side - come love i whisper gently, .. '

What a dream and what came from it.. glorious! Said before, you always take prompts in a direction all your own, then, lay them so graphically across the screen. Tis strange you add the scent of lilacs because have heard that the smell of lilac can wake the dead.. think Germanic derivation? Perhaps that's not wholly appropriate when talking of taking a person's hand and leading him into the glorious light of forever.. but..

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Hmm, interesting about the lilacs...I did not know that..thanks for reading Emmajoy, I so appriciate.. read more
Aahhh....determined to break your mood.......such an apt description of those who are not flummoxed by our grumpiness and remain able to spread their light and love until we "turn".

Beautiful writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reading and for the review..much appriciated..
Beautiful!!!!
I really liked this poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Many thanks, glad you liked it..
Hi Fran. I am always in for a treat when I read your submissions and this was no exception. Very lovely indeed!. Thank you so much for joining in my contest. ~ Helena ~

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks, so much, Helena, I always enjoy entering your. Contests..
Beautiful. One final waltz before we go. Can we wish for anything more.
Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks so vey much..I appriciate it.
a passed soul returning to dance another soul into the next life...what a beautiful image you paint here, Fran...well-done

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Many thanks, FT, I so appriciate it;

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