and we danced~

and we danced~

A Poem by Fran Marie

..contest write. For Blue Rose cafe challenge


and i danced..  as if in a hazy dream


                                    like a ballerina

amid lilac's heavenly scent, on a sunlit day


                                  and there you lie

in a pitch-black room, sad drowning in misery


                    and i danced over to your side

come love i whisper gently, take my hand

                                 and there i stood

waiting determined to break your mood

          and the smell of lilacs grew stronger

with an unpleasant odor

                                   and there you died

as i held your hand in mine

        and then in the black room shone a brilliant light


  and we danced~



© 2015 Fran Marie

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Author's Note

  Fran Marie
Just a dream that seemed so real

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I really liked this poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago

  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Many thanks, glad you liked it..
Hi Fran. I am always in for a treat when I read your submissions and this was no exception. Very lovely indeed!. Thank you so much for joining in my contest. ~ Helena ~

Posted 2 Years Ago

  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks, so much, Helena, I always enjoy entering your. Contests..
Beautiful. One final waltz before we go. Can we wish for anything more.
Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago

  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks so vey much..I appriciate it.
a passed soul returning to dance another soul into the next life...what a beautiful image you paint here, Fran...well-done

Posted 2 Years Ago

  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Many thanks, FT, I so appriciate it;

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Added on September 7, 2015
Last Updated on September 8, 2015

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