Love's Perfections

 

 

 

 

My

heart bleeds

for you babe

but my pen does

the bleeding~my blood

writes this poem, you're now reading

my mind shifts in your divine direction

with words so sweet, sweet as confection

as my soul whispers softly my passionate affections

let me show you the deepest view of love's perfections

 

 

Reviews

[Bishonen]

I am intrigued on how you sayed "as my souls whispers." I don't know why but it stuck a cord with me but of course that is not saying there was only one good line, by all means it seemed to get better and better. Just like learning how to get to perfection.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem. Well Done!

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

Ths was is very deep andI really love this kind of format

[TL Boehm]

I love the way the lines increase on this one....the thought that the pen bleeds. I find that resonant. Nice work Fran.

[PoemRodent]

A very good and deep felt write Fran! Well penned, you go girl!

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

[Fran Marie]

THanks for reading

[musegirlsm]

This poem is so beautiful! The first two lines are amazing! I love the layout of the poem, it makes it look as beautiful as it sounds. The rhyme scheme is perfect and does not sound forced.

Great Write!

sandra

[Elise O'Haire]

This is beautiful. I love the line "but my pen does the bleeding". Wonderful.

Elise O'Haire

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I loved the way you started this poem. "but my pen does the bleeding" great line. Nicely done.


Great Write

[T. L. O'Neal]

This is a loving poem and sensual in a lighter way. Love the layout of it. T