Gypsy Woman

Gypsy Woman

A Poem by Fran Marie


My tarot  cards hold destiny. lines in hands tell

   your story.. Ripe as mango  fruit sweet juice of

life flows from within your veins

 you stand on the ridge of golden years

 as an army of angels play

the angelical music of the harp.


perhaps the cards show no kindness

yet it is necessary to be truthful than to

say there is much hope in future relations

of any kind.. no residual love awaits ,,,

I see these things for I am that Gypsy Woman



          



© 2016 Fran Marie



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really interesting piece of work here. I love your use of words and the overall lingo of the piece as it really accentuates the topic. I also really appreciate the way you conveyed the difficulties of the gypsy woman where sometimes her reading may bring unpleasant results but its better to stick to the truth rather that to comfort the hearts of the one being read as its always hard to deliver bad news. Very well done. And keep up the good work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks.. so very much appreciated



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It's funny...I have just written a piece about a gypsy woman only now...and I found this on my feed...really vibrant and colorful imagery, ma'am...I found the phrase "ridge of golden years" very striking....if you hadn't underlined those words, I would never have imagined that it was for a contest, given the fluidity of the piece.......cheers!

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

thanks, Moons fairest, so very much for reviewing.. yes it was a contest for ten given words..glad y.. read more
your story.. Ripe as mango fruit sweet juice of
life flows from within your veins
you stand on the ridge of golden years
WHAT ALLURING WORDS, WOW :)
LOVED EVERY BIT OF THIS PIECE OF ART

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

thanks so very much, Apoora, for reviewing my poetry..glad you enjoyed
This is a nice one
Gypsy woman- interesting write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much...
really interesting piece of work here. I love your use of words and the overall lingo of the piece as it really accentuates the topic. I also really appreciate the way you conveyed the difficulties of the gypsy woman where sometimes her reading may bring unpleasant results but its better to stick to the truth rather that to comfort the hearts of the one being read as its always hard to deliver bad news. Very well done. And keep up the good work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks.. so very much appreciated
very enchanting... overall i thought you did a great job on this.. nice work

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks Sean so vey much..i so appreciat..☺
Sean M. Addams

1 Year Ago

NO PROBLEM
I love the imagery in this poem! Really well written piece!

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks, Riley so much appreciated
I loved this one...good flowing piece. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

thanks, Kathy; so very much..
Very nicely written poem. It's difficult to write a poem using selective words but you've done good job. Well written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks, so vey much appriciated;
What makes this poem stand out is the way you've used so many details to remind us of the gypsy woman, and it's amazing how you've used certain assigned words, taking the ideas into very unexpected territory. Starting with "ripe as mango" and going along to where that sentence ends at "harp" -- such a unique & interesting way to describe this gypsy . . . who ends up being "you"!

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Barley for the kind comments ..I so apptrciate;
I saw that contest as well and no images sprang to mind, but this is was great.

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Cherrie, so vey much..

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Fran Marie

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