Gypsy Woman

Gypsy Woman

A Poem by Fran Marie


My tarot  cards hold destiny. lines in hands tell

   your story.. Ripe as mango  fruit sweet juice of

life flows from within your veins

 you stand on the ridge of golden years

 as an army of angels play

the angelical music of the harp.


perhaps the cards show no kindness

yet it is necessary to be truthful than to

say there is much hope in future relations

of any kind.. no residual love awaits ,,,

I see these things for I am that Gypsy Woman



          



© 2016 Fran Marie



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really interesting piece of work here. I love your use of words and the overall lingo of the piece as it really accentuates the topic. I also really appreciate the way you conveyed the difficulties of the gypsy woman where sometimes her reading may bring unpleasant results but its better to stick to the truth rather that to comfort the hearts of the one being read as its always hard to deliver bad news. Very well done. And keep up the good work.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Months Ago

Thanks.. so very much appreciated



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this is really great,and the image topped it off ! and you hit all the words given

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks, Ron, so vey much;
 wordman

1 Year Ago

my pleasure
A great tale in a poem. Very descriptive and good use of the words needed for the contest. You really did great with them and created a enjoyable poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks Tina, so very much..
Tina Kline

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome.
Fran, such wisdom here...there is indeed no hope. We just think it all up to keep ourselves in a bubble. The gypsy woman summed up life and love so beautifully. She is stunning! I loved this creative idea here. ❤

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

So true.., thanks Divya..so very much appriciat your reviews..
as you say, the cards are always challenging and we have to be kind of gypsy to play freely with them!
lovely reading

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

gkad you enjoyed, thanks ever so much...
This was a wonderful poem, using the 10 words to their best advantage. Thank you for submitting this to my contest Fran Marie!

~ Helena ~

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks Helena, so very much appreciated;
I think this must be for a contest, hence the under-lined words? If that's the case you've worked beautifully to create a poem using those words.. and yet produced a poem that works so finely.

You really do make poetry in all its guises, Fran Marie!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

thanks, emmajoy, ever so much appreciated
i think broken love affairs can make gypsies of us all...we feel love for us is not in the Cards...and we shy away...become transient hearts.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Thanks, Jacob. so very much appriciated..
I liked the Gypsy woman. They didn't like me. Told me. I was to wild for them too. I like the tarot cards. Nice tale told in the poetry. Good to have the Gypsy spirit. Thank you dear Fran for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Year Ago

Lol,,wild man..guess the tarot cards warned them to beware of you..thanks so much for reading John;
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Fran.

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