Gypsy Woman

My tarot  cards hold destiny. lines in hands tell

   your story.. Ripe as mango  fruit sweet juice of

life flows from within your veins

 you stand on the ridge of golden years

 as an army of angels play

the angelical music of the harp.

perhaps the cards show no kindness

yet it is necessary to be truthful than to

say there is much hope in future relations

of any kind.. no residual love awaits ,,,

I see these things for I am that Gypsy Woman

          

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

really interesting piece of work here. I love your use of words and the overall lingo of the piece as it really accentuates the topic. I also really appreciate the way you conveyed the difficulties of the gypsy woman where sometimes her reading may bring unpleasant results but its better to stick to the truth rather that to comfort the hearts of the one being read as its always hard to deliver bad news. Very well done. And keep up the good work.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks.. so very much appreciated

[Sourav]

Very nicely written poem. It's difficult to write a poem using selective words but you've done good job. Well written!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, so vey much appriciated;

[barleygirl]

What makes this poem stand out is the way you've used so many details to remind us of the gypsy woman, and it's amazing how you've used certain assigned words, taking the ideas into very unexpected territory. Starting with "ripe as mango" and going along to where that sentence ends at "harp" -- such a unique & interesting way to describe this gypsy . . . who ends up being "you"!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Barley for the kind comments ..I so apptrciate;

[Cherrie Palmer]

I saw that contest as well and no images sprang to mind, but this was great.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Cherrie, so vey much..

[Norman 223]

I unsuccessfully tried to write something for this contest, so I have to admire your ingenuity in producing such an intriguing "clairvoyant" storyline..

Norman

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Norman; so vey much, glad you enjoyed

[Tomás Ó C..]

It is not what you say but how it is said... woe awaits us all, but the joys make it worthwhile...

[wordman]

this is really great,and the image topped it off ! and you hit all the words given

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Ron, so vey much;

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Tina Kline]

A great tale in a poem. Very descriptive and good use of the words needed for the contest. You really did great with them and created a enjoyable poem.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Tina, so very much..

[Tina Kline]

You're most welcome.

[DIVYA]

Fran, such wisdom here...there is indeed no hope. We just think it all up to keep ourselves in a bubble. The gypsy woman summed up life and love so beautifully. She is stunning! I loved this creative idea here. ❤

[Fran Marie]

So true.., thanks Divya..so very much appriciat your reviews..

[angelina neves]

as you say, the cards are always challenging and we have to be kind of gypsy to play freely with them!
lovely reading

[Fran Marie]

gkad you enjoyed, thanks ever so much...

[Helena]

This was a wonderful poem, using the 10 words to their best advantage. Thank you for submitting this to my contest Fran Marie!

~ Helena ~

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Helena, so very much appreciated;