Missing Angel

A Collaboration Write by Fran Marie and David L.Price

 

    
Snow skirts another new day
still my mind envisions pink.
Warm and sunny dreams of you stay

where I am its dark as night
I slumber yet still I think
I long to see and hold you tight

Chilled weather holds it's grip
and nips my cheek, yet I think
of the enticing warmth of your lips

Your touch stimulates electrical synapses
I feel your lips and want to drink
I see our life in brilliant flashes

Icy tree limbs bend in deep freeze harm
but my heart is feeling insync,
knowing I'll soon be in your arms

You can’t hear but I scream to be heard
Perhaps a telepathic link
Then you’d know I hear your words

Blustery winds breathe without care
yet my soul inhales your love's drink
and weary woes do ease when you're here 

The blustery winds won’t take me away
My resolve to stay won’t bend or kink
I’m coming home, your love it lights the way. 

 

Author's Note

Fran wrote Stanzas 1,3,5,7
Dave wrote Stanzas 2,4,6,8

Reviews

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

This is another example that two riters can blend their thoughts and imagination to create one literary work of art. It doesn't always come together so easy I assure you but Fran is a fabulous writer and sometimes when I read her work I think, or maybe it is I want to believe, we think alike. i love the voice of the female charcter in this. It begs of having something that was taken away, the warmth of her love. When I wrote the male voice for this piece I wanted to echo that sentiment but from the stand point that he can't make it back. That hes right there but at the same time a world away. He can hear her and sense her touch but can't see her, talk or move to her. The male voice in this is in a coma desperately trying to find away back to his love.

I don't know if everyone can pick that out of the words but there it is.

I loved doing this piece. Fran is a truely wonderful talent.

Dave

[Confuser]

Wonderful collaboration Fran and hats off to Dave as well. It was beautiful every single word. Thank you both. Great job!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Dale..we so appriciate your review..glad you. Enjoyed

[Confuser]

Great writing!

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, how expertly you have blended your writing talents! I enjoyed it all, and just love the lines...

The blustery winds won't take me away

and,

my soul inhales your loves' drink

You have done a beautiful job of combining styles....I cannot tell that two people have written it, and that is indeed talent!
BRAVO TO THE TWO OF YOU!

Sheila

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow what a great poem. Fantastic write. I love the flow and the compassion feeling. I am looking forward to reading more.

[APoetsMuse]

I really love this one. Bravo....Great read!

[Lyrical Love]

Great work! I love the mixed voice of reason...
Thanks, Lyrical

[Tony Hwilka]

I think this poem is so romantic I wish I wrote it. I have a couple of questions-- in the first stanza (you stay)
was that a typeo for your stay. In the fourth stanza the word synapses is a little over the edge for such a beautiful and simpy poem-- I think. The very last line your love it lights the way. Leave the It out. Again I envy you two.

[None]

You both did a beautiful job creating this treasure. Wonderful writing with so many visuals within. A fantastic collaboration! I can see why you won an award for this.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

"I'm coming home your love lights the way'.. love does shine .. this is so beautiful .. so romantic..
Great job you two!

Chloe
xoxo

[Lydia Shutter]

A wonderful collaboration, Fran and David. The two of you blend ink so well! Lydia

[Phil Sanders]

Another delightful poem .....