Shadows of The NighT

 

 

Shadows of The Night

This vampire's heart cannot be tamed
without mercy 'tis you I shall claim

and my vampire soul cast upon evil winds
lives to destroy,devour and always wins

with my mind set in a plague of deceit
I'll pamper my vampire need and make you weep

and my vampish eyes will penetrate with unearthly light
spreading terror and fear to all in my sight.

My vampire laugh haunts and taunts with torment
an evil so profound which knows no repent

with damp-vamp lips you receive the kiss of death
as my teeth sink deep, completing my bestial bloodfest

My vampire power is cosmic energy of nocturnal force
'pon dark shadows of the night showing no pity or remorse

Reviews

[Bryan A.]

First of all, I keep looking up at the picture at the top. Dude, perfect picture. Second, this sort of made me wish I could feel the teeth sink into my skin. Very creepy, but really awesome. I'm quickly becoming a huge fan of your work. Vampires are my all-time favorite mythical creatures and, in my opinion, you really did the idea of them some serious justice. The description was amazing, and I'm really glad I got to read this.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the couplet's contest!

[Sean M. Addams]

this poem has a cool blend of darkness running through it ... I loved the imagery and flow in this piece.... overall a very impressive write.... fav lines....and my vampish eyes will penetrate with unearthly light
spreading terror and fear to all in my sight.

My vampire laugh haunts and taunts with torment....................... awesome just awesome!!!
an evil so profound which knows no repent

[Spawn]

this is definetly one of my favorites so far. vampires are amazing and this poem compliments them amazingly. Very descriptive and visual. I love it. Awesome job.

[Daisy]

Ohhhh! This all seems to come from the mind of the person in the picture. I was looking at her and the words were coming from all around. Thought this was really cool.

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

the tones of darkness were absolutely decadent in this piece...Wonderful Write!!!

[Lydia Shutter]

Great vampire write, Fran...haunting! I liked the graphic you chose to accompany your words. Lydia

[Valentine]

I am not into vampires or the occult but parts of this were writtten quite well..God bless..valentine

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Some lines didn't rhyme - but still the imagery was great in this! Very nicely done, Fran.

Great Write.

[Phil Sanders]

Tremendous imagery ....