Cosmic's Gown

 

 

You're miles
   away and
      my words ride free
          on wings of blissful dreams

 

Absorb my warm spirit
   thru~a magic moonlight glow
        Feel my touch thru~
             sprink'led raindrops

 

Hear me whispering
        from the  nearest stars
              have the heavens,
                     planets, Venus and Mars

 

Let love rotate and gravitate
     towards where you are
               It's just my essence of
                     deep love illustrated

 

'Tis but my heartbeat,
         clad in cosmic's gown
                                loving you

Reviews

[Joe]

Pretty. You may not have even realized it, but the font, which matches the purple in the picture, paints a light, soothing, pleasant read, making the poem that much softer. It was sincere and gentle.

[angelina neves]

"'Tis but my heartbeat,
clad in cosmic's gown
loving you"
- lovely! very beautiful!

[Tara Jean Olson]

this paints a wonderful vision

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

some great images in here - they didn't pop so much for me, but they were still strong. well written

[The Archangel Gabriel]

" Feel my touch thru~
sprink'led raindrops"

Wonderfully said. Being apart is so difficult if you are in love.

Great write!

-Gabe

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is really a beautiful mystical poem.. i like the idea of the wind taking or carrying our words , messages to others. Cosmic Veil is really a beautiful term.

Chloe
xoxo

Also a very nice structure.
All mine are blocks lol

[PhoeniX]

ooo so fascinating! favorite verse:

'Hear me whispering
from the nearest stars
have the heavens,
planets, Venus and Mars'

well done