Elusive Dream~DBL Acrostic~

Elusive Dream~DBL Acrostic~

A Poem by Fran Marie

 

 

 

Elusive Dream~DBL~Acrostic)

E nvisioning love with you Darling in my lif E
L eaves my soul feeling numb~i cannot fee L
U s, rather me alone~empty arms without yo U
S truggling, when the sunshine of my life fade S
I nto intense darkness,Yes,that is the time when I
V enture aimlessly into the night~ void of your~ lu V
E luding shadows dance, i cannot grasp,where you ar E

D eep clouds of despair in bleak hues tear my eyes now shade D
R endering a crying sun,now stripped of warmth and golden colo R
E ternity merely slips back to the eleventh hour~ It's simply too lat E
Alas~'Twas not meant to be for us, call it fate,or perhaps bad karm A
M y Darling,you are just my~~~~~ E L U S I V E ~~~~~D R E A M

© 2008 Fran Marie


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Wow, this is really powerful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is really really good I can tell you put some real thought I love the two sides acrostic. amazing job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Congrats on your great winning Acrostic!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Fantasic acrostic Fran, I really love it! Admire the double. Thank you for sharing and entering my contest. Debileah

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice theme, double splat! The poem was very nice, too!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow..this is amazing a double acrostic ..a perfect write..i like it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, what a masterpiece. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Your double acrostic is a masterpiece to behold! Every line is perfect and meaningful from beginning to end. Although I feel the sadness in your poem, at the same time I am delighted with your writing skills. You really shine with your sad but beautiful writing scheme!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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