Chords of Enchantment

`Chords of Enchantment`

Sing for me ~a song of spring
with notes as soft as butterfly wings
and vivid images of verdant green
sing the song, the sweet robin sings

Sing for me~sweet nothings heard
add a radiant rainbow to behold
and splendid plumage of a peacock bird
sing the tones, which still my words

Sing for me~awesome azure skies
a soft magic moonlight,which leaps into lover's eyes
of a thousand star's sparkling light
sing the chords of enchantment,filling the night

Sing for me~a smooth sandy beach
indigo waters,beyond mere mortal's reach
one of charm and boundless beauty, deep
sing the tunes of twilight's gleaming sea

Sing for me~love's caring caress
delicious desire fused by passion's kiss
of fleshy red roses, fragrant scents of bliss
Yes!, oh, yes, sing for me~ a song of all this!

 

Reviews

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

just watch out for your rhyming - in structured poetry you do not want to suddenly chnage the pattern.

Overall, I liked it. A little too sing-song for me, but good. keep writing and best fo luck :)

[The Outlaws' Song]

Soft and caressing, lovely!!Absolutely beautiful:)

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Wow! This is so good! You wrote perfectly about spring and new beginnings. I loved this piece. Very good!