Summer Rain

 

Rain

falls down.
Will you walk
with me in the
warm summer rain?

You

do and we share blissful
moments~rain stimulates our
senses and fresh wet scents
unchain our passion as

We

embrace~unleashing
desires within, as rain
droplets fall on our skin
under the romantic mist

 

 

 of a summer rain 

Reviews

[MoonlitAngel]

very sweet, short and to the point. I loved it :)

--Blood

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful poem. Excellent imagery. Like this poem alot, I also like rain in summer alot. Great job on this romantic poem.

[ABBY]

wow this is sooooooooo beautiful!! i love it. great job

[Angel's Lady]

Ah, this really is so very beautiful! Congratulations on your win with this piece! I understand why very well! Great write!

[Tara Jean Olson]

bravo, fran!

[Lexy]

Very good job... I like the animation of the picture.... Well done, and sorry for repeating. :)

[Phil Sanders]

Delightfully written ...