Sweet Serenity

 

 

 

 

 

whispering winds and indigo waves rush ashore                           delicate, enchantment fills her heart                                    sweet serentity her soul doth breathe     serene moments which relax her mind                      with misty sea scents of soothing thoughts                                   she beholds this beauty's quiet ambience      escaping stress, wrought thru~ man and time              reaping serenity's splendid recompense                      and a milky moon lends a bit of magic to the night

Reviews

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

wow you are an astonishing writer and i am proud to be allowed into your world. well done

[Rogue Daffodil]

Thanks so much for your entry into my 'Serenity' contest. Sorry it's been so long. I'll have the winners posted soon. This piece is wonderful, by the way. I enjoyed it very much. :)

[Justin Tobey]

Strong, enchanting imagery. I don't usually like when big pictures like that are added to poems, but this really added to the beauty. I have to know, though. Is the poem based on the picture, or were you just lucky enough to find it? Either way, good job!

[Tara Jean Olson]

i liked your choice of vocabulary.