Forever and A Day

Forever Love~Serpentine verse form~

Warm breezes and scents of misty rain warm
my heart. A summer's romance taps my
soul,contentment flows to this anxious soul.
Trips down lover's lane trips
my senses,waking them up~My
life renewed, pleasured by your love so full of life.
Loving you is so easy, as I lie in your loving
arms where I'll stay, in your warm embracing arms
forever and a day.~always and forever~

Author's Note

Serpentine Verse

Serpentine verse has only one requirement the first word of each line must be the exact same word as the last word of each line. And let me warn you although the concept of this form is easy, actually carrying it out may be a little harder than you would think

Reviews

[Michael]

Hi Fran,

I like that you tackle the less common. You always do it so well. I guess the telling of just how well is one does not see it right off because it reads so nicely.

Well done.

[Dani California]

I can learn from you Fran..
and plan to. :)

This is lovely, romantic
-- and I'm intrigued by the form..

I hear you're exceptional at form writing...
and it appears I heard correctly :)

I look forward to reading more of your work...

Outstanding .. thank you Fran.

[Tovli]

a lovely example of the form and I enjoyed the sentimentality and romantic feel. nicely done. tovli

[angelina neves]

wonderful!

[MY]

Beautiful - I always love the paradocs which lies in forever / a day, another example is my favorite qoute:
Life; seems boundless yet just a second
Very lovely poem and filled with love !!

[emz]

Very clever... i would struggle with this style of writing... but your poem was simplicity personified.. well well done.

[Rainbowco]

As always, it seems, you offer up something new and special for me to read;this is no exception. Beautiful.

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A beautiful and hypnotic read . . .

SP

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A wonderful write. So much meaning in a few words. Thank you for sharing