you

 

Charmed by your caress

  caressed  by your tender touch

       touched by your kisses

               kisses from your lips

                lips that trail my neck gently

                              gently loved by you

 

Reviews

[A.J. Smith]

You know I am enamored both with this form, and your writing, Fran. Together...yikes! This is an instant favorite. I absolutely love how you start with the end...and your overall visual presentation is wonderful. Very, very nice...subtly, delicately sensual. This belongs in an anthology of love poems for sure.

[Taylor H]

you entered this into my contest and i really liked it

[Suelou]

Wow! You said so much in so few words. This is beautiful.

[Rainbowco]

Once again you shock and awe me with your writing. This is stunning Tanka, and the way the last word becomes the first word in the next line is amazing.

[Constance]

I like the way the last words of a line lead to the beginning of the next. This is creatively crafted. I also like the tenderness and loveliness of your words. Very nicely done. I would have liked more, it seemed too short because it was going so fluently along. :)

[Tara Jean Olson]

it is a sweet reminder- a gentle poem:)