Suppose

Suppose

A Poem by Fran Marie

 

Suppose I wrote my feelings down in poetic verse

would you even read one line

Suppose I practice and rehearsed

spelling it out for you in rhyme

          

if I were to say I love you

would it be so wrong

Suppose I wore my heart on my sleeve

would you think me weak or strong?

 

Suppose the feeling was mutual

saying you cared and felt the same way too

and all along in your heart of hearts

I was the one for you

 

Suppose you scribbled love poems down

would it be that I would care

Suppose you perfected each word and sound

for mine eyes to behold if but I would dare

 

Suppose we two could meet in time

a chance to gaze into eyes that would show

the love supposed in rhyme on line

then we could really know

 

Suppose all the love songs sung

were meant for you and I

then perchance, I suppose,

I would write love poems for thee

my love 'til the day I die

 

 

 


© 2010 Fran Marie



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Excellent poem. Your word choice and organization show such an intelligence to bring the words to life. Your ability to rhyme is uncanny and It shows that you put time and effort into your writing, unless it comes second nature, in which case I would be the first to say that I were envious of you. Great write. Keep up the good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is amazing, love the use of words and the simplicity of the write really appeals to me.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


This is amazing. Great. I felt your emotions, and that's so good.

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

Thanks Tushar. So much .. I so appreciate..😀
Woah woah woah...! What was this... i am awed by this poem ! Fabulous fabulous fabulous write... I am so glad i could read this...Usually there are some lines that are my fav in a poem but when i read this ...the entire poem is my favorite.. Enjoyed

Posted 6 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Months Ago

thanks so very much,glad you enjoyed
heartspeaks

6 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing
This is really good, well structured and I enjoyed it thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Months Ago

thanks so much;
Superb poem, brilliant choice of words and alliteration

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks so vey much for reading my poetry..much appricated..
kanyinsola okafor

2 Years Ago

You welcome. I would appreciate your review of my poems.
Wonderful set of suppositions. Very well written and presented. I might be inclined to put a d on the end of practice in keeping with the rest of the poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Yes..I see what you mean...I'll have to correct that..thanks so much Appriciated...
Lyn Anderson

2 Years Ago

I feel it is an honour to help with one who is so well read.:)
Love how this poem flows, I didn't want to stop reading

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Anika,
This is lovely; I really enjoyed reading it. The flow was truly fantastic!

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is very relateble i loved t, great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


My God this was simply perfect your use of words combined with the image that was painted by them is amazing I salute you for this genius!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

7hanks so very much;

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