A Mouse in The house!

 

Yipes! A mouse in the house Oh! what a surprise! It ran under the sofa I saw it with my own eyes. Then it darted behind the TV! What was I to do? Sitting at my computer being oh so busy. that mouse started nibbling at my shoe. EEEKKS!! I screamed, you Lil' Rat! jumping up on my chair. I'll have to call in Tom the Cat. Then see what you dare. Well don't Ya kno, He stared me down with his beady eyes as big as you please. Then he went to town started eating all my cheese! Hey! you Lil' squirt, what do you think you're doing? and I jumped off the chair I chased him with a broom, 'Twas only fair. but the critter kept on chewing. Into the bathroom he ran and hopped into the tub. Then to the kitchen garbage can and finally back to the living room rug   Well, I gotta tell Ya. I was pooped! my energies had been spent. I still ain't caught that mouse in the house. I wonder where he went? It's been a week and I've not seen hide nor hair of him. All I know is if I do, I wonder who will win?

Reviews

[Sonakshi Arora]

This gave me a hearty laugh! Thanks for sharing

[Fran Marie]

Thanks..so glad you enjoyed..😀

[WillaDanvers]

This poem made me smile, it is something I imagine reading to little child at bed time in a comical voice :)

[Indra Neil]

LOL! a fun write packed with wit and humor! the rhyme flow is wonderful!

[Fran Marie]

ThNks ,Infra, so very much appreciated;

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol lol lol lol lol. This is funny. Darn mouse runnin all over the house. Lol. Nice poem, keep writing :)

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, Danny, I so appreciate..

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sorry i'm late with this...been very very busy... You are welcome :)

[wordman]

well this is certainly a sweet write,hope you win the contest

[Shekinah2015]

Thank you for entering this poem into the Funny Poems writing contest. It came extremely close to winning! Thank you for this opportunity to read your work. I would have selected it if I could have chosen more than three winners. God bless!

[Fran Marie]

Not a problem, thanks for reading ...glad you enjoyed

[Deron Anthony]

Very warm hearted and silly.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you,

[Dean Kuch®]

Hah, go get 'em Tom!

This was funny, and that little animated mouse? How could you help but laugh? My guess, since no 'hide nor hair; has been seen of him/her again, is old Tom the Cat is a little bit less hungry now...

Hilarious stuff here, Fran Marie!

[Fran Marie]

thanks, Dean,...glad you enjoyed'

[Dean Kuch®]

You are welcome, Fran.

[Diane Lockard]

That was great, it had a musical beat to it, happy, funny, creates a range of emotions...

[freelancejouster]

ahhah, this is so cute and funny. reminds me a bit of tom and jerry.