Fair Maiden Rose

Unrequited Love~Rondeau Form~

 

Fair Maiden Rose sat still to pose

donned a silk sheet in lieu of clothes

He smiled with each stroke of his brush

Rose deep in thought, yet she did blush

and wondered if the artist knows

 

her envisioned love for him grows

as a handsome romantic beau

Shy, she remained in silent hush

Fair Maiden Rose

 

Charmed in his presence she arose

Slipping into her silk dress robe

as he applied the paint's last touch

his goodbye kiss revealed so much

he named the painting, she supposed

"Fair Maiden Rose"

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Augustus]

Wow! So delicate and so tender....Lovely lines with a perfectly smooth flow...evoking romance in a pristine form...elegant and elevated...and the painting accompanying the poem is so apt... this write leaves the reader in a trance...

[deeps]

This is a beuatiful write I enjoyed this.

[Adela Muresan]

Ohh, spendid imagery, and it has style too ...it's a lot more different than love poems around, revailing the passion between the lovers in an original way.

A.M.

[Annie K.]

It's so simplistic and beautiful, I really love it! It also reminds me of Jack Dawson drawing Rose in "Titanic" but I like this imagery better.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ahh nothing like a muse to bring out the best in an artist work... a very beautiful piece of work.

[Emily Burns]

beautiful rose-tinged words. . . such a romantic verse!

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Lovely combination of poem and picture, Fran! I could see the artist's brush in your words. Sharon

[Last Lying Look]

Wow. This was very beautiful. I really enjoyed this. The picture was wonderful as well.
Thanks for adding this! :)