Shattered Glass

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The world is made of shattered glass

       and shattered broken dreams

               perception rules

                                 reality

 

sometimes sunshine

    peeps thru~the cracks making life 

                                   worth the living

   a stain glass world to see

 
the ups, the downs

   in a topsy-turvy world

                         mania~ blues

  can we see it?
 
 

Giving; taking

         what's mine is yours or is it?

                                who cares in

                                    this world of shattered glass
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Gandré]

the ups, the downs


in a topsy-turvy world


mania~ blues


can we see it?-----------------this was the favorite part of your beautiful poem with psychologic character and poetic drawing up that seeks his own kind! I liked the metaphysical character (especially in the begining of your poem) and metaphysical poin of view on identity - about what makes one the same person over time when failures like life brings them with it...mark our personality. Wonderful poetry!

[Dianah]

Hmm... thought provoking. Love the opening.

The world is made of shattered glass
and shattered broken dreams
perception rules
reality

sometimes sunshine
peeps thru~the cracks making life
worth the living

a stain glass world to see

[ScorpioPoet]

lovin the style and the flow of this! i think it's a beautiful poem :)

[An owl on the moon]

The imagery is so captivating, and your style here truly moves us into the darkness of this shattered world. So intense and gripping.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

I really liked your shattered glass.

[Mr. Lopez]

Very wise words and wonderfully written.

sometimes sunshine


peeps thru~the cracks making life


worth the living
I really liked these lines.

Mr.Lopez

[Laura E. Aranda]

Good luck in the contest! Cheers,lea