Frankly My Dear....

Frankly my dear I dont give a damn

Really, I'm glad you walked out the door

And I'm doing quite well, really I am

No need for you to control my life anymore

 

My burden is so much lighter

A new lover I have found

Reaching a star that shines brighter

I now have a love more profound

Everlasting and eternity bound

Reviews

[Jean]

Wowie! :) I like this. It flows wonderfully and has an appealing attitude. I like the wording.
*Scrounges around to think of a helpful tip*
You could try out a couple different words and see if they fit better. Seeing as you used 'really' twice (which isn't a problem) you could change the second one to 'truly', or something? Also, perhaps change eternity to eternally? Neither is necessary obviously, just something you could look at. It all depends on what you think sounds better. ^^
I love it either way :)

[Connie]

excellent writing, Reaching a star that shines brighter- loved it

[Helena]

Amazing Fran Marie! I loved where the 'challenge' took you, although I note this was written by you a year ago!

Good job poet and thank you.

Helena

[Fran Marie]

Thanks again Helena,I always enjoy entering the contests...

[Helena]

You are welcome my friend!

[Laura Lynn]

I like it too, nice! I should get back into writing. I didn't get to be a writer for some reason, yet I am just a person with habits, got to change them into something else,

[Frieda P]

Very clever acrostic....love that first line, you followed through quite aptly...

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much. Frieda;

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Reading through the contestants in Acrostic poem contest. Yours I love. Really relevant to the acrostic. Great poetry.
Best regards. Clive.

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much;

[Frances O'Neill]

A well-phrased unrequited love poem.

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I like this alot..a creative and well wrten acrostic poem...great write

[Ian]

This is a very original poem!
It's very creative and very well writen.
I liked it a lot.
Great write!