Bluebells

Haiku

 

 
Dainty Bluebells hang
 
             softly on emerald stems
 
                                      silently ringing

Reviews

[Nolo Segundo]

This is well done: a true haiku!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Nolo, so vey much☺

[Swetha]

i can't believe the amount of imagery you've created in just three lines!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Swetha, so bet much appreciated;

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and poetry. Flowers can make us feel life is rebirth and beauty. Thank you for the amazing photo and words.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much, John;

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Kieta!]

I really like this! I like the way you said they were 'silently ringing'. Very cool! :)

[Fran Marie]

thanks Kieta,so very much;

[Vandana Sharma]

This has such a beauty to it and a very calming and charming piece:)

[Star Wolf]

I really like this one a lot!

[Cathy Wattam]

Beautiful picture, beautiful Haiku. Bluebells are my favourite wild flower and you have certainly done them justice here. Very nice write.

[eatmills]

I love the unintentional (?) oxymoron of the last line. The picture was a nice touch for me cause I had no idea what a Bluebell is. And that's where I stop.

[Desert Dreamer]

I love the sound of the silent ringing of bluebells, something you can only hear in poetry. I wonder who the bells ring for. Your poem has given me something to ponder.