RaZz-Ma TaZz

a fun write for New Years Eve

Razz- Ma -Tazz
   and all of that Jazz
     where's my baby tonight
 
 
 
Got my top hat on
   and not much else
      I sit alone all by myself
 
 
  My honey is nowhere in sight
 
 
No one to dance with
       no New Year Kiss
            and don't ya just know
 
 
I'm havin' a fit,cause I'll be missin'
         your sweet lovin' and kissin'
           and all of that Razz- Ma -Tazz
 
 

Reviews

[Haley]

I am in love with this, it's fun and upbeat, while still being about missing something. There's an unspoken beauty of missing someone without having it be painful and it's comforting to see someone manage to capture it!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Haley
s o much I
appreciate your
kind review;

[Chris Shaw]

A really upbeat way of saying you are missing someone on new year's eve. Fun and your posted image suits perfectly. Happy New year to you Fran Marie. Hope 2021 is a better one all round.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

y e a.upbeat that's true
back in the young
days though if you
didn't go out read morey e a.upbeat that's true
back in the young
days though if you
didn't go out
or have a date
new year eve
it was a fate worse
than death.haha
and you dare didn't
admit you stayed
home..thanks Chris
and a very
Happy New
Year to you😊

[Anni Pon]

I really like the flow and the structure of this; the rhythm is so musical and jazzy. This would make awesome lyrics to a jazz song. :D

[Fran Marie]

thanks Anni
for your kind
review on my
poetry; much
appreciate d

[barleygirl]

LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! This is a great way to express a lonely refrain! I have to admit I get a little tired of the dreary messages many post here at the cafe. That's why I'm especially admiring you for being able to miss someone & still make it sound jazzy & fun! Love the title, which drew me in! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[siddhi]

beatiful peice of writing here


thankyou for sharing this lovely peice fran marie



your frnd

siddhi

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks. I so appriciat ir..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love this poem....and all that jazzy poetry of yours, Fran Marie.

we miss you around here.

j.

[Fran Marie]

Many Thanks, Jacob, hope to be back online more since Christmas is now over..Cheers and Happy New Year

[alifeacoustic]

Nicely captured Fran Marie. Full of hope and expectation for the coming year, as well as for the phone or doorbell to ring before the bells. Hope it did :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for reading and happy new year...

[wordman]

well girl happy new year and heres a big kiss at midnight just for you

[Fran Marie]

thanks for the kiss..umm whaa back at ya..and Happy New Year!

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Cool and jassy

[AK]

"and all that Razz- Ma -Tazz"... indeed. Nicely done, this!