Because

 

I'm going to write in my journal today
memories of yesterday
and of course my darling
you shall hold a page or two
not only in my book of memoirs
but in my happy heart too
 
 I'll write of how we first met
and the intimate meetings I shant forget
those cozy nights embraced in your arms
entranced by all your loving charms
 
I'll tell of how you tripped my senses
tapping into my emotions
stirring my deep desires
into passionate moments
 
Of the time we dared the stars not to shine
in a world that was just yours and mine
private thoughts we shared within our soul
the deep serenity of losing control
 
I'll write of our love beneath a sapphire sky
and a diamond moon climbing high
I'll write the many words you whispered to me
of this and so much more and what you mean to me
 
    this because I love thee

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

I'll write of our love beneath a sapphire sky
and a diamond moon climbing high
I'll write the many words you whispered to me
of this and so much more and what you mean to me

' this because I love thee

This is absolutely beautiful! I love poetry that romanticizes the moon and stars.

[Jvonne]

Wow, what can I say?
I loved your choice of words. A short yet powerfull poem with alot of depth.
I can't criticize you anywhere. It's lovely!

[Poet's World]

Oh my god!!! this is such a lovely poem, i love the metaphors used and the poem is so touching, this shows how much deep you love the person...

[Marie Harrison]

Very touching poem, made my heart glow with memories of my own.

[Just Plain Me]

This is just beautiful :]

[Victoria Chang]

This is a very beautiful poem!! my favorite line is "Of the time we dared the stars not to shine
in a world that was just yours and mine." It is indeed very touching

[Ladysue]

Fran, this was a stunning. I loved the sentiment and the beauty in which you wrote this is just splendid! A very touching piece that conveys a deep love. Beautifully composed!

[Ange Pange]

That was simply amazing.

I'll write of our love beneath a sapphire sky
and a diamond moon climbing high
I'll write the many words you whispered to me
of this and so much more and what you mean to me

I loved that so much! Sapphire sky, diamond moon. Wonderful! Good job! :]