Because

 

I'm going to write in my journal today
memories of yesterday
and of course my darling
you shall hold a page or two
not only in my book of memoirs
but in my happy heart too
 
 I'll write of how we first met
and the intimate meetings I shant forget
those cozy nights embraced in your arms
entranced by all your loving charms
 
I'll tell of how you tripped my senses
tapping into my emotions
stirring my deep desires
into passionate moments
 
Of the time we dared the stars not to shine
in a world that was just yours and mine
private thoughts we shared within our soul
the deep serenity of losing control
 
I'll write of our love beneath a sapphire sky
and a diamond moon climbing high
I'll write the many words you whispered to me
of this and so much more and what you mean to me
 
    this because I love thee

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

I'll write of our love beneath a sapphire sky
and a diamond moon climbing high
I'll write the many words you whispered to me
of this and so much more and what you mean to me

' this because I love thee

This is absolutely beautiful! I love poetry that romanticizes the moon and stars.

[Victoria Chang]

This is a very beautiful poem!! my favorite line is "Of the time we dared the stars not to shine
in a world that was just yours and mine." It is indeed very touching

[Ladysue]

Fran, this was a stunning. I loved the sentiment and the beauty in which you wrote this is just splendid! A very touching piece that conveys a deep love. Beautifully composed!

[Ange Pange]

That was simply amazing.

I'll write of our love beneath a sapphire sky
and a diamond moon climbing high
I'll write the many words you whispered to me
of this and so much more and what you mean to me

I loved that so much! Sapphire sky, diamond moon. Wonderful! Good job! :]

[Orahemae December]

Great write!
Of the time we dared the stars not to shine
in a world that was just yours and mine
private thoughts we shared within our soul
the deep serenity of losing control

this is perfect. it really shows how you feel.
keep up the good work.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful!

[AK]

Whew... very nice indeed!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is lovely... focus on those wonderful memories and not the bad...

you shall hold a page or two
not only in my book of memoirs
but in my happy heart too

loved these lines... so very endearing.

[Shapeshifter]

this is a double killer in my opinion. Beautiful, and passionate, this poem is sweet, but not too sweet. It speaks to me of the commpanionship of which we all dream. More than love; to communion. Sublime.

[just is]

I'm going to write in my journal today
memories of yesterday
and of course my darling
you shall hold a page or two
not only in my book of memoirs
but in my happy heart too

These lines here, make me think of someone
This is a wonderful write here.
I can feel the emotion of love in this.