A Winter's Gray

 

 

 

 

 a winter fire
     

   charred ashes lay amid snow

                                icy-cold and gray

 

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

This was a wonderful write.

I use to fight fires and, in my early of early days. There was a time we fought a fire like this back in the mid west during a winters Ice Storm. The water froze as fast as we put it on the fire.

Great Photo.

Wish I had some of them old photos that I have lost from back then.
Thank you for sharing Fran.

Art

[beefjerky]

the idea of this is really creative and i love it... but your first line has 6 syllables, the rest is fine though... good work (a little editting won't hurt!)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning Haiku-Singles contest!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This is really good, first line only has four syllables. Still have time to fix it.

[DanaRegen]

Well written and BEAUTIFUL!
Great job Fran!
-Dana :)

[Gandré]

what a wonderful HAIKU. looks likes from the world of Doctor Schiwago...

[Aimee Mahathy]

Short, but very delectible! I rarely enjoy poems that are so short, but this is so full of imagery and the chill of winter that I couldn't help but love it!
Winter fires are always eerie feeling, the contrast of ice and fire.
Lovely job!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very minimal but yet, still very descriptive. Very nice.

[Demosthenes]

I enjoyed this.