Depression

Triplet Couee form

 

~Triplet Couee~

When light of life soon disappears
and depths of darkness gather near
you simply cannot tell

 

With cold and deadly force it comes
So bid farewell your daily sun
It's despair straight from hell

 

Living demise which kills quite slow
You've no recourse, no place to go
It's the same as Death's bell

 

 

Without remorse, it bends and breaks
Rules and controls. your soul it takes
Evil; penetrates well

 

It seeps so deep,'neath skin to stay
Your dark companion,night and day
Life is a hollow shell

 

Its spade digs deep.a dark black pit
from it's clutches,you cannot get
It's far from feeling swell

 

A mis'ry filled with so much pain
an illness that drives you insane
To take gun, end it all

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece i really think you did a fantasic job on this... a very powrful write... fav lines...It seeps so deep,'neath skin to stay
Your dark companion,night and day
Life is a hollow shell



Its spade digs deep.a dark black pit
from it's clutches,you cannot get
It's far from feeling swell

[Jess Holden]

I love itt!!!

[Nathina Outright]

I love this poem! I can really relate to it.

[QuietPoet]

Very deep emotional write. Very nicely written. Thanks for entering my contest. =)

[We are young.]

ooo this is exactly what I was looking for, thanks for letting me read this, it is simply fantastic.