If You Knew My Wishes

If you knew how long I've waited 
    how many stars I've wished upon
how many nights I anticipated
    to hear precious words whispered
from your lips,that to you I belong

 

 

If you knew how much I love you
     and how in my dreams you are mine
where seeds of time with love grow strong
     and love keeps multiplying with time

 

 
If you knew my world revolves around you
    as everytime the moon shines bright above
 with ev'ry setting sun and rising dawn anew
    'tis when seeds of time grow with love
     

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh what words of tender love and strong passion,How your words,brightened my day ,I swear
Oh how I waited long,How many stars I wished upon,How many night I hoped
To hear whispered words from your lips ,telling that to you i did belong
if you knew how I loved you ,And in my dreams you were mine
Love multiplies with time,My world revolves around you
With each moon that shines above
Each setting sun and rising dawn
My love will grow with time
God what loveliness..how I love those love poems,They just drive me crazy
And like I want to live my life all over again..ha ha
lovely write..

[Brad]

sigh...yeah, if only

[An owl on the moon]

This is so beautifully moving... the rich colors painted across the landscapes of love... Your tender words bring to life the feelings of a two lives melted into one...

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

A truly great read. I enjoyed the powerful emotions utilized.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is truly inspirational .. I can't believe I missed it before.. love the flow and feel of emotions.. love the image as well.. well done and going to favorites for future inspiration!!! =)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much

[Gandré]

This passion wants to be lived!
Seeds of time grows love - what an idea!
Original and wonderful... this poem
has the rate of some repeating event
and intensity!