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Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt

Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt

A Poem by Fran Marie
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"Master of Suspense" Alfred Hitchcock brings back "Master of The Horror Genre" Famous Filmstar and Actor Vincent Price~ for Sean's Contest

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In a pit dark and black he lies
he suddenly begins to rise
an evil gleam within his eyes
a new disquise, who was this guy?
 
A bony hand pushed from the mud
covered in gore and dark red blood
How blessed he thought,freed from death
to breathe new life, to take a breath
 
A new image he now possessed
as he stood above his tomestone rest
but who had granted this liberty
this gift of immortality?
 
In a distinctive tone of voice he said
I refuse to die, I will not be dead
then he heard a distant cry
as "The Birds" fell from the sky
 
"Good Evening" a man cloaked in black
I am the one who brought you back
you owe me, Price, you now must pay.
A vampire part in my new play
 
The Master of Suspense pulled out a script
called "Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt
Vinny roared with laughter at such a role
" This part is perfect, for it has no soul"
 
"True, so true but you still have a heart
and I'm in charge of props that play a part"
this isn't "The Haunted House on the Hill"
your not just playing a vampire~This is real!
 
or is it?
 
 


© 2010 Fran Marie



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i'm really really impressed by this piece ... the darkness and story of this piece were just brillant .... overall very nice job on this one ... this is definitley going in my favs.... lines in this I liked alot....The Master of Suspense pulled out a script
called "Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt
Vinny roared with laughter at such a role
" This part is perfect, for it has no soul"

"True, so true but you still have a heart
and I'm in charge of props that play a part"..................... very genius!!!!
this isn't "The Haunted House on the Hill"
your not just playing a vampire~This is real!



Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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ANM
Very cleverly done really enjoyed this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much ANM,
The Master of Suspense pulled out a script
called "Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt
Vinny roared with laughter at such a role
" This part is perfect, for it has no soul"

Great work … a little Faust thrown in with the Stoker:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Pryde, much appreciated,
Oh I love this genius poem Fran Marie!!!
So much fun and perfect for the season.

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks Ana, so very much;
This is a terrific piece. Great imagery and such a wonderful dark write. Awesome job!!!

Heather

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congratulations for winning the vampire contest!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely! as far as dark, tales go! I love the idea of raising Vincent Price from the dead, and recasting him! Great one!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the flow and the imagary. An absolutely frighteningly great write!!!

Josie

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Cool... scary... aaaaagggghhhhhh!!!! lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vincent Price would love being a vampire, I'm sure. Well done Fran.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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