`Midnight Splendor`

 
Still wrapped in your midnight caress
 the scent of you permeates the air
never wanted the night to end
 I'll  wait 'til you reappear
 
 
I long for you darling, you'll find me still here
 wearing your shirt with the essence of you
making sweet love again
 is all I simply want to do.
 
 
Still wrapped in your midnight charm
  sending my thoughts to heaven's height
tripping all my senses into sensual sin
  hoping to feel your passion peak tonight
 
 
Oh, how I'm still reeling
  from kisses so divine
dreaming of love's rhythmic movement within
  feeling  your heartbeat as mine
 
 
Still wrapped in midnight splendor
  counting the moments 'til you return
knowing  what I'll do when you walk in
  anticipating with a desire to burn
 
 
I'll no longer be wearing your shirt's embrace 
  but bare inside your arms
feeling the splendor of your love again
  and the warmth of all your manly charms
 
 
 
 

Reviews

[The Slayer]

Amazing passion. You really explained what us girls like to do when our lover isn't with us. I love to wear my boyfriends sweatshirt because it makes me feel safe and protected, or I would if i had one :/. Very amazing. "So I'll go sit on the floor wearing your clothes all that i know is I don't know how to be something you missed." I love this line from the song Last Kiss by Taylor Swift. Your poem really reminded me of this. Thank you :)

[Fran Marie]

7hanks so much for the reviews on my poetry.....i so appreciate it;

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've always felt that an embrace is underrated. I love being held by a man. In just seconds, the whole world becomes obliterated, and the feeling is even more intense if it is someone you love. You exude passion here, with the feeling of wearing a man's shirt - what could be more sensual?

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for the visit and review..me too ..I love being wrapped up in the arms of a man..the body heat and cozy embrace I find so sensually divine

[Chris Shaw]

This is such a sizzling and sensual read Fran Marie. I paused to reflect on past times :) A true delight to read. Your lines and longing for love conveyed so well here. There is something special about wearing your man's shirt. Love the posted image too.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Awhh..thanks dear Chris for reading and reviewing..I so much appreciate it..and yes..love wearing a man's shirt .yes special and.also very comfy

[M.E.Lyle]

Well, now you"ve done it. You've gone and got me all riled up, and for an old man my age, it's a dangerous place to be.
I remember getting, or having all those feelings before. It always seemed more like fantasy than reality, and reality never quite seemed to live up to the fantasy, and then I had a double bypass.
Today a good medium rare steak is my fantasy.
This is a great write, and really does stir the emotional pot.
You have a wonderful talent.

[Fran Marie]

Hi. M E..sorry to have riled you all up..school showers help..lol..I ever so appreciate your review on my poetry..

[one sky]

Well-written, my friend. I love the flow and the rhyme scheme.

[ANM]

Very well written and vivid with passion!

[Brianna Brie]

Charming poem! Physical love is an expression of the heart. Love the passion!

[Deeksha]

Wow, this had so much passion in it!

Good luck in my contest. :)

[Magdelena]

This was amazing! I loved the structure. The form was perfection, while the words and images took one along the ride of your words.. Delighful my gal, stunning in fact. Oh I so love Passion!!!!


Mag xx

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this wonderful winning poem!