`Ragdoll Puppet`

`Ragdoll Puppet`

A Poem by Fran Marie


 I know you're out there
I can feel it in the midnight rain
 a stranger in a raincoat
a face without a name
 
I see you standing on the corner
 from my window late at night
and when I look again
 you disappear into thin air
and fade out of my sight
 
 I feel connected like a puppet on a string
a ragdoll mystery breathing in the wind
 your aura caresses my very being
and once again a dead heart sings
 
I taste your sweet sweet essence
 savoring it in my soul
a strange and eerie presence
 suddenly takes control
  
 I see you in my dreams
we dance and stir the stars
 lovers so it seems
we already are
 
I feel as though I'm waiting
 for you to hear my call
amid a midnight misty rain
 from this puppet ragdoll
that I may know your name.
 
     yes,I know you're out there
 
 
 

© 2011 Fran Marie


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Fran you really know how to bring out the dark side in us all with these chilling writes... you could put a book together of stories and poems to make a Ghoulish Halloween.

I taste your sweet sweet essence
savoring it in my soul
a strange and eerie presence
suddenly takes control

I really love that verse.

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, that was wonderfully put together! I think I am in love with your writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Sarah, so very much...
it's so beautiful i really enjoyed it

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thank you, so much...
I did not think it was creepy at all. I thought it was like a hidden truth. I really love your words

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks so vey much..glad you enjoyed;
lovely write, enjoyed every line, well done very well done ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is really great! You're an amazing writer :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I appriciate the review...
This was amazingly written! I can feel the dark atmosphere around me and see shadows. Very well done! Keep Dreaming.

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks, Kana, so vey much, glad you liked it..
good job writing this...... keep it up

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks Daisy, so very much
AH the horror poem. Always good for a read. Good one

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ewww, did I tell you how much these things creep me out? The movies "Magic", "Poltergeist" and "It" kind of finished me for dolls and clowns. Twilight Zone didn't help either. Great read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

lol, thanks KL...I didn't realize it was creepy when I wrote it..it was meant to be kinda a love poe.. read more
Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

It is very creepy, at least for me.:)
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Mia
I'm not a fan of the final line "yes, I know you're out there"...it feels to me as though it breaks the flow of things. The last stanza ends so well it wouldn't miss that line, in my opinion. Other than that I really enjoyed it, I was entertained. It has a creepy feel to it which I enjoyed!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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