Alimony

Alimony

A Poem by Fran Marie
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limerick

"

 

Once I was married to sailor Dan

whose bum ended up drunk in the can

but I'm such a good sport

that I took him to court

now his rum is alimony in my hand.

 

 


© 2015 Fran Marie



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It was really fun to read. Thanks for sharing :))May the best person win

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

thanks, glad you enjoyed,,,
Excellent job Fran, a true limerick told.

~peace, Todd

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks Todd, glad you enjoyed..
Awesome and funny limeerick Fran. Smiling here....set my day off right! Thanks for contributing to my challenge! ~ Helena ~

Posted 3 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Many thanks Helena, glad you enjoyed;
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Hi Fran. Brilliant!!!! can't say any more than that!! Don't know the technicalities of limericks but this reads to well and is just sooooo hilarious. love it, alf

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

Thanks Alf, so much, glad you enjoyed
This is a really worthy effort at a limerick but I think its humour transcends its technique...

Very funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Freakin' hilarious! I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol, A delightful Lymerick! Very funny!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha...

'whose bum always ends up drunk in a can...'

That's funny, Fran. Guys that drink too much always hug too hard :-))) Rock on, my friend.



Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lol! That's what he gets for drinking so much. Great job Fran! Very funny.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hot damn Fran that was awesome. You go girl.

Posted 8 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 14, 2009
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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