A Holiday Heart

A Holiday Heart A Christmas spirit fills the air as snowflakes touch the ground carols and laughter ev'ry where delights the sense of sound with Silent Nights, Joy To The World echoing thru~the town Hustle-Bustle~all's in a whirl last shoppers dash around. Holiday travelers take road to come see kith and kin As yuletide greetings set the mode all joyful souls join in The gift is in sharing your love your gift from deep within A Holiday Heart, other's abode as this Season begins.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

A holiday heart that is filled with the spirit of Christmas! You have certainly helped set the mood for me to do more preparation in anticipation for this wonderful time of the year!
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The gift is in sharing your love
your gift from deep within
A Holiday Heart, other's abode
as this Season begins.....HOW TRUE!!

Beautiful lines!!

[annie.]

You've captured it perfectly!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Tis the season Fran and you warmed up the the season with this delightfully festive piece.
YOu have captured the spirit of the holiday in this Jolly poem.

[Marion A Sadler]

Hi Fran

I like the sentiment expressed here very much. One can see the family tavelling to Mom's for Christmas. I like the imagery too. The flow/meter is a little stilted in places..ie the line the gift is in sharing ...
might flow better if you use "the gift of sharing..." instead. Overall a lovely piece which I enjoyed.