Flames of Love

Flames of Love

A Poem by Fran Marie
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french sonnet

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flames of love

french~sonnet

My love,your flames of love consume my soul
it's such an ecstasy which feels divine
sending sizz'ling shivers of love sublime
your magnetic charms seem to take control
Your kiss exhales glowing life into me
yet, breathlessly my calming claim is bliss
a pleasure burning passion such is this
those exotic flames spending forth from thee

O' new dawn, why spill light and love must end
'twill, be nightfall until we meet again
'tis dull light which dampens hot embers cold
yet,our sparks shall remain to re-ignite
beneath a magic midnight moon quite bold
which fires sapphire's sky, scarlet bright!


 

 

 

© 2010 Fran Marie


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sending sizz'ling shivers of love sublime ------ha! this double triple alliteration is something and it has its meter and the rhyme, I am in awe!
which fires sapphire's sky, scarlet bright! -------- and here again the doubled alliteration, so intense, for it is on the top an onomatopoeia!
perfect in 10 syllables. Well, this is called amazing creation. (thank you for your review on my small text!)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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The poem is very sensual and romantic. It flows with grace and the word choices are great. To feel this kind of love is amazing and you have described it perfectly with strong conviction.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i'm speechless on this one but i think u did a superb job on this ... a very impressive piece... your talent is always a blessing to WC keep up the great writes

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

{Wow!-okay-well this a great write and i could say-'hot'
but it's more a conflagration of gorgeously worded phrases-
really it's a sensually tactile piece of poetry-i love it!!!}

james:-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congratulations!

Posted 13 Years Ago


well conceived and well written M'lady Love inspires so many poems

Posted 13 Years Ago


sending sizz'ling shivers of love sublime ------ha! this double triple alliteration is something and it has its meter and the rhyme, I am in awe!
which fires sapphire's sky, scarlet bright! -------- and here again the doubled alliteration, so intense, for it is on the top an onomatopoeia!
perfect in 10 syllables. Well, this is called amazing creation. (thank you for your review on my small text!)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Fran you are talented poet and your french-sonnet typifies this. Well done for Ivor's contest, thanks for submitting this! ~ Helena

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow simply lovely Fran... I must say your words do create quite a flame... no I stand corrected, an inferno on my screen.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You certainly have a lovely command of the poetic form. "Breathless" is a word I needed to use while reading this as the passion spilled from line to line. Good stuff.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely very intense write and the picture Tops it off this is going intomy favorites.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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