My love,your flames of love consume my soul it's such an ecstasy which feels divine sending sizz'ling shivers of love sublime your magnetic charms seem to take control Your kiss exhales glowing life into me yet, breathlessly my calming claim is bliss a pleasure burning passion such is this those exotic flames spending forth from thee
O' new dawn, why spill light and love must end 'twill, be nightfall until we meet again 'tis dull light which dampens hot embers cold yet,our sparks shall remain to re-ignite beneath a magic midnight moon quite bold which fires sapphire's sky, scarlet bright!
sending sizz'ling shivers of love sublime ------ha! this double triple alliteration is something and it has its meter and the rhyme, I am in awe!
which fires sapphire's sky, scarlet bright! -------- and here again the doubled alliteration, so intense, for it is on the top an onomatopoeia!
perfect in 10 syllables. Well, this is called amazing creation. (thank you for your review on my small text!)
The poem is very sensual and romantic. It flows with grace and the word choices are great. To feel this kind of love is amazing and you have described it perfectly with strong conviction.
i'm speechless on this one but i think u did a superb job on this ... a very impressive piece... your talent is always a blessing to WC keep up the great writes
{Wow!-okay-well this a great write and i could say-'hot'
but it's more a conflagration of gorgeously worded phrases-
really it's a sensually tactile piece of poetry-i love it!!!}
sending sizz'ling shivers of love sublime ------ha! this double triple alliteration is something and it has its meter and the rhyme, I am in awe!
which fires sapphire's sky, scarlet bright! -------- and here again the doubled alliteration, so intense, for it is on the top an onomatopoeia!
perfect in 10 syllables. Well, this is called amazing creation. (thank you for your review on my small text!)
You certainly have a lovely command of the poetic form. "Breathless" is a word I needed to use while reading this as the passion spilled from line to line. Good stuff.