It Doesn't Matter
A Poem by
Fran Marie
It doesn't matter
not really
wasted lies
promises unkept
tears wept
it doesen't matter
not really
loving
hating
years waiting
it doesn't matter
not really
truth
soul's reflection
self-inspection
it doesn't matter
not really
seeing
knowing
indifference showing
it doesn't matter
really.
© 2010 Fran Marie
Featured Review
This is a strong statement of truth within that is shared eloquently with such few words that are so full of wisdom. Love it, especially
"seeing
knowing
indifference showing
it doesn't matter
really."
It so obvious by these words you are a wise woman that knows what she wants! Great write! ~ Judi :-)
Posted 13 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
Reviews
I really like this one! We all have bad days and I hope yours gets better. Stay strong!
Posted 9 Years Ago
I really like this one! We all have bad days and I hope yours gets better. Stay strong!
9 Years Ago
Thanks ,Casondra, so very much,
That is a great poem. I haven't read your work in a while. Every changes after a year so. Thank u for sharing this poem with us.
Posted 12 Years Ago
That is a great poem. I haven't read your work in a while. Every changes after a year so. Thank u for sharing this poem with us.
I enjoyed this Fran, there is truth in this. Very well said and written
Posted 13 Years Ago
I enjoyed this Fran, there is truth in this. Very well said and written
Interesting take on why it doesn't matter,
and yet some times it does matter.
beautifully written.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Interesting take on why it doesn't matter,
and yet some times it does matter.
beautifully written.
Few words of deep meaning plus an execution at par with the vivid imaginary. beautiful read.
Loved it!!! Wonderful!!!
Bravo!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Few words of deep meaning plus an execution at par with the vivid imaginary. beautiful read.
Loved it!!! Wonderful!!!
Bravo!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is a strong statement of truth within that is shared eloquently with such few words that are so full of wisdom. Love it, especially
"seeing
knowing
indifference showing
it doesn't matter
really."
It so obvious by these words you are a wise woman that knows what she wants! Great write! ~ Judi :-)
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is a strong statement of truth within that is shared eloquently with such few words that are so full of wisdom. Love it, especially
"seeing
knowing
indifference showing
it doesn't matter
really."
It so obvious by these words you are a wise woman that knows what she wants! Great write! ~ Judi :-)
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
I must say very bold words of letting go... I love this verse...
truth
soul's reflection
self-inspection
for the search for the truth in the aftermath is only something you can do alone.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I must say very bold words of letting go... I love this verse...
truth
soul's reflection
self-inspection
for the search for the truth in the aftermath is only something you can do alone.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I guess things have taken a down ward trend.....courage
regards,
vincent
Posted 13 Years Ago
I guess things have taken a down ward trend.....courage
regards,
vincent
I think this is good. I agree with the whole poem. Good write. Thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think this is good. I agree with the whole poem. Good write. Thanks for sharing. :)
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