It Doesn't Matter

It Doesn't Matter

A Poem by Fran Marie

It doesn't matter

not really

 

wasted lies

promises unkept

tears wept

 

it doesen't matter

not really

 

loving

hating

years waiting

 

it doesn't matter

not really

 

truth

soul's reflection

self-inspection

 

it doesn't matter

not really

 

seeing

knowing

indifference showing

 

it doesn't matter

really.

© 2010 Fran Marie


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This is a strong statement of truth within that is shared eloquently with such few words that are so full of wisdom. Love it, especially
"seeing
knowing
indifference showing

it doesn't matter
really."
It so obvious by these words you are a wise woman that knows what she wants! Great write! ~ Judi :-)


Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I really like this one! We all have bad days and I hope yours gets better. Stay strong!

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Thanks ,Casondra, so very much,
That is a great poem. I haven't read your work in a while. Every changes after a year so. Thank u for sharing this poem with us.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed this Fran, there is truth in this. Very well said and written

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting take on why it doesn't matter,
and yet some times it does matter.
beautifully written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Few words of deep meaning plus an execution at par with the vivid imaginary. beautiful read.

Loved it!!! Wonderful!!!

Bravo!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a strong statement of truth within that is shared eloquently with such few words that are so full of wisdom. Love it, especially
"seeing
knowing
indifference showing

it doesn't matter
really."
It so obvious by these words you are a wise woman that knows what she wants! Great write! ~ Judi :-)


Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I must say very bold words of letting go... I love this verse...

truth
soul's reflection
self-inspection

for the search for the truth in the aftermath is only something you can do alone.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I guess things have taken a down ward trend.....courage

regards,
vincent

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think this is good. I agree with the whole poem. Good write. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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