Blood Sweat and Tears

My Love,  you are to me

  my blood, sweat and tears

I'll absorb your pain

   and make it alright again

 

 

I know you're hurting right now

  but it won't always be that way

better times are coming

     just wait and see

 

 

I know how to make

  you happy again

this time will be different

  I won't play my foolish games

 

 

I'll give up my wild wicked ways

   no more longstem promises

this time you will know I'm sincere

        as I love only you

 

 

No more will I run with the crowd

  No more backstabing

That life for me is over

   just give me another chance

to love you once more like you know I can

 

 

That's enough!!

of the Blood Sweat and Tears!

 

 

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Wonderful sentiments here! With love we send forth promises from within our souls. You touched mine with this piece

Loved it!

Mags xx

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a cry of longing flowing here... In the pain that so often surrounds us, it amazes me that the right person can make diamonds out of coal... Promises promised and more...

[Brianna Brie]

I'll give up my wild wicked ways
no more long-stem promises
this time you will know I'm sincere
as I love only you

Cool...I like the long-stem promises. It put the image of a dozen black long stem roses into my mind. Nice write!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful poem with a deep sincerity weaved in each stanza. The emotions are easy to understand.

[Sean M. Addams]

very powerful piece liked this alot and thought you did well with it

[.]

"I know how to make
you happy again
this time will be different
I won't play my foolish games"
{Hum?-i can relate--seems someone said
something like this to me to me once...}
{Great Verse!}

I Love This Poem!!!

james:-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

no more longstem promises...

I love that line... what a way to describe short term love that dries up after the bloom... to truly love you must give your all.