Dessert?

Dessert?

A Poem by Fran Marie

Strawberry Ice Cream?
 with chocolate chips
 Sounds sweet and creamy.
 Make mine with whip cream on the top.
 Add some bananas, cherries,
and pineapples pieces,
cause i like a lot

 'Tis such a delicious dessert
 After meals or anytime.
 Oh the joy of eating fruit!
 
Peach Cobbler? oh yeah, I'll have that too
sprinkle some raisins in it please
what's that? Cherry Jublilee
yes, please just serve it to me!
 throw in some Honeydew melon bits too
cause it's sweet thru~ and Thru~

'Tis such a delicious dessert
after meals or anytime
Oh, the Joy of eating fruit!


 Apple pie? oh yes, it caught my eye
 also I'll have a glass of fresh lemonade.
Plum Pudding?
Well, heck, yeah, just put it on my plate!
with a slice of Cocoanut cake

'Tis such a delicious dessert
after meals or anytime
Oh the joy of eating fruit!


 

© 2010 Fran Marie


Author's Note

  Fran Marie
oh lord.. I just gained 10 lbs. writing this ..don't read if you're on a diet....lol

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Too late, I read it before your warning. I'm drooling! I had some homemade Coconut ice cream last night the was the last word in creaminess and couldn't stop thinking about it until I read your poem. Now I have other things to obsess about. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thank for such a great entry to my little contest. Can't say yet if you're in the final, but you gotta good chance.
Loved it, had to go get a snack.

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

thanks so much;
Fran! Your poem should have a warning at the beginning not the end! Scrumptiously divine poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol, this is doing my weight no good. This is an excellent, delightful read about gustatory delights! I like the repetition too. It is tasteful.
Great job! I really like this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


cute work and so SWEET..HEHE

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yummy!

Peach cobbler and banana splits (with a banana)
* last banana split I got had no banana, imagine that! lol

Fresh fruit .. warm apple pie with ice cream.
This all sounds delicious.

One little typo (raisins)

peace n light

Posted 13 Years Ago


yummm, what a tease, drooling-alert :) food can truly make us happy ~L

Posted 13 Years Ago


I gained just by reading this poem. Good thing it is almost midnight and my stair lift is broken. Great stuff. Loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Too late, I read it before your warning. I'm drooling! I had some homemade Coconut ice cream last night the was the last word in creaminess and couldn't stop thinking about it until I read your poem. Now I have other things to obsess about. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delightfully appealing to my senses without giving me a tummy ache... have I got a craving or two now.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blueberry and cherry pie with french vanilla ice cream are my favorites. Thank you for presenting the dessert tray in delicious verbage.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 28, 2010
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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