BLack SouL

BLacK SouL A fair skin creature

with a dark black soul

she possessed the black powers of the night

An evil power out of control

she morphed into a she devil vamp

in pale moonlight




fangs pointed and perfectly white

dripping with blood from dead cold breath

polished tin eyes glowing bright

with fixed stare like a vexed viper

gauranteed torture

and your death



her soul blacker than the pits of hell

her heart chisseled of cold chilled stone

sprawling sharp nails crimson red

hanging flesh

from gray ashen hands

of blood marrow bone



satan's black slave a dog on the prowl

seeking blood, death and destruction

inhabiting the sad black earth

in bloodfest fashion

savoring her prey

carrying out her black soul curse

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

I have always wondered what it would be like to be that woman in the pale moonlight, Fran Marie, and you bring the fantasy to life with such clarity... The description is remarkable as you set a tone of the bleak at heart...

Thanks for the ride, my friend...highly exciting to the senses...

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I love the imagery of this

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Phoenix, so vey much,

[M.D Leon]

haunting piece, excellent quality. i could picture your idea so clearly that its in fact a huge merit on its own. its flow, its pull. all very well written and expressed. great work.

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You write this with as ease - a subject that you have crafted with a precision tool..a wonderful emotive dark read..

[Lalli]

Sounds............. like..........
my ex. :)

good imagery you really captured the essence in your description.. This could bea very powerful metaphor for well people like my ex.. lol

much love n' respect

-Lalli

[Brianna Brie]

A fair skin creature
with a dark black soul
she possessed the black powers of the night
An evil power out of control
she morphed into a she devil vamp
in pale moonlight

Nice read...you have peeked my interest for the vampire ;) Time to write.

[Tim]

I've always loved horror and this is really good. You not only give good details but deliver them with intensity. Nice work.

[James Harding]

The imagery in this is so beautifully vivid, the colour of the "crimson blood" juxtaposed against the "cold chilled stone," conveys such a fantastic portrayal of the
"she devil vamp". Good Job!

[The Cute 1]

owww thats good

[Vitcky Walker]

Impressive and dramatic......