Magic Valentine

to my valentine

Magic Valentine
Babe~ wrap your arms around me
whisper to me words weaved in passion

breathe love into my soul with the kiss of fire
a valentine by magic so designed and fashioned


you're the one I burn for, the one I so desire
watch me wave my magic wand and make it happen

Author's Note

A short sweet nothin' valentine's day write~ ^-^

Reviews

[David Michael]

Well apparently I chose two of yours. Oh well, no matter. You deserved it! :) This isn't quite as lovely as your last, but like you say, "A short sweet nothin'." However, it still has an eloquence to it, the words finely woven together. The rhyming in this one is subtle - I didn't notice on a first read. The alliteration isn't as pronounced, but it's oK, it still works well. Again, thanks for the good read! I'll be watching for more of your works...

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

A short and good one to read, a cute as well as a demanding one, the picture animation is very much complimenting the poem....

[al25]

Really well written. You express your feelings really well.

[Tate Morgan]

God why couldnt i gt one of these for valentine I would have given you anything you asked lol

[Sean M. Addams]

very beautiful and expressed well.. a very enjoyabled read ..nice job on this!!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This was good I enjoyed the read been a while eh my friend? Welcome back Fran.

[Brianna Brie]

Beautiful sentiment!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It only takes one special moment to make love bloom... a simply sweet poem that warms the heart.