I wrote this one based on what I see in the picture.
It's proof that true love really exist out there, even though it's rare but it's there.
Charles thanks a lot of your review, your suggestion for this piece is something I didn't think about. I will differently use it.
I added a song for this piece as well.
A mellow time passed them by, not once did they refute their relationship, even through the hard times and cries and still through it all their sight could see past all of the pain they may have endured and their love stayed as high as the sky the softness of their skin lost in time, crafted love and youth survived (they made it through it all.) Until the end of time our love will always shine (till death do they part.)
This poem is so beautiful, it reminds me of my husband, I’m lucky enough to have found a love like this, so I can really relate to it.
This made me picture soul mates, you know you have a love this is so incredible and undeniable, from the day you meet, you know that you have found a love that will make you both strong and weak and that’s what this says to me, that’s what soul mates experience.
It’s not a spark or a feeling of lust when you first meet, or the first time I love you is whispered, it’s an explosion of emotions, you want to laugh and cry all at the same time because you know that you have found a love so true, and you’re scared to lose them and you know that you cannot live without them.
This is a really, really good poem, I’m going to put it in my library. You described such a perfect love. 100/100
this is beautiful..it reminds me of my parents..married for currently 57 years..the were each others first and had lived for one another..Dad health is failing and this just brings the beauty of there union all the more into my heart..thank you for this touching piece which has brought a tear to my eye and a large lump to my throat..
This is a really sweet piece. And when I look at it, i want it so much. Want sooo much to be with someone I can grow old with and love forever. When my dad was sick, i never seen the look on my mom's face that i saw when she looked at him for the last time and I want that... When I look at my husband i want to see our lives in one glimpse;)
If it was truly inspired by this picture then this is indeed very good my friend...I am someone who honestly has some difficulty in writing on pictures....hence i do have an awe for those poets who can write with such flair and beauty just by taking inspiration from a picture.
Love indeed is hard to find and yes once one finds it...he or she should never let it go...
Not even death can take your soul, before all this was the spirit was here already.. Death is the most divine angel you need to met at the end.
Nothing can break love.. goes beyond life and into eternity~
My style of writing poetry is a little different. My poems mostly inspired by photography, and music. A picture is worth a thousand words and I love find the words within the photo.
Frantzou Fleur.. more..
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