I wrote this one based on what I see in the picture.
It's proof that true love really exist out there, even though it's rare but it's there.
Charles thanks a lot of your review, your suggestion for this piece is something I didn't think about. I will differently use it.
I added a song for this piece as well.
A mellow time passed them by, not once did they refute their relationship, even through the hard times and cries and still through it all their sight could see past all of the pain they may have endured and their love stayed as high as the sky the softness of their skin lost in time, crafted love and youth survived (they made it through it all.) Until the end of time our love will always shine (till death do they part.)
This poem is so beautiful, it reminds me of my husband, I’m lucky enough to have found a love like this, so I can really relate to it.
This made me picture soul mates, you know you have a love this is so incredible and undeniable, from the day you meet, you know that you have found a love that will make you both strong and weak and that’s what this says to me, that’s what soul mates experience.
It’s not a spark or a feeling of lust when you first meet, or the first time I love you is whispered, it’s an explosion of emotions, you want to laugh and cry all at the same time because you know that you have found a love so true, and you’re scared to lose them and you know that you cannot live without them.
This is a really, really good poem, I’m going to put it in my library. You described such a perfect love. 100/100
Just beautiful, graceful. I lov this line: As the fluted sound of time past us by
As time goes by, the love stays, grows. The picture you put with
this is really touching as well.
This was both sad and beautiful. As I read the poem, I started thinking of the book "The Notebook", which shows that love never dies. Excellent job, keep up the good work.
I adore relationship's like this, that last for a lifetime. It's really rare to find a relationship between a marriaged couple that lasts without cheating, divorces, loss of love, etc. It is a truly beautiful poem, especially with the music that portrays the poem so well. Could you possibly tell me the song name for this poem? I really enjoyed the song.
Great write!
Great poem!
And Great poet!
~Smiley :)
This is lovely! I really really like it, it's amazing. And I totally agree... I wish this world realized how truly wonderful forever love is. They seem to have forgotten it in this generation.
This is so pretty. One of my favorites!! 100/100, as always!
My style of writing poetry is a little different. My poems mostly inspired by photography, and music. A picture is worth a thousand words and I love find the words within the photo.
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