it's such a stunning canvas that your verse paints! as i reader, i saw clearly the often vague and blurred visions that linger somewhere between slumber and consciousness - in the gray space that fills the spaces between dark and light. i felt the strength of soaring dreams - those that can carry the soul to heights undiscovered, to the yet unexplored (but palpably close) territory of realization and reality.
the last two lines of the verse are exquisite! the image of foot prints rising to the top and "Leaving behind just enough wind for the kites..." adds a brilliantly serene shade to this magical picture!
stellar verse there!!
"With a teasing shadow smiling like those unreachable stars"
It's a rather unique description, and this whole piece is unique, not cliche at all. Every time I read it over again I love it even more. Great write :)
My style of writing poetry is a little different. My poems mostly inspired by photography, and music. A picture is worth a thousand words and I love find the words within the photo.
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