INcepTioN

So surreal it becomes a dream

A dream in the grip of a reality

Reflecting the blurry side of a fading conscience

As my mind and thoughts clash and ponder

For a second I begin to wonder…

 

I run upon a thin line between life and time

A wretched feeling, An emptiness

 A suffocating heart beat

A formless trip into the emptiness

Suddenly my eyes open into the darkness…

Reviews

[Charles]

I like the brevity of this poem and the weaving together of concepts that match the picture so well. I had a hard time deciding whether or not there was a rhyme scheme or just coincidental rhyming with a few repeated words thrown in for good measure. Nice job.

[Bette]

i like it well done.

[BreedsWithDragons]

the first two lines gave me that feeling you get when youre in the middle of reading a great book and you find something out about the protaginist that changes the game. you just want to read the line over and over and over again.

[BaByWrItEr216]

Yeah this is a very good piece.
And yea i just seen the movie and it was definitely something that makes you wonder and constantly stay in deep thought...lol

[Candylove.]

I love this, it's beyond words! :)

[Zoe]

i havent seen the movie yet so i did not understand it fully

[Phalen Schuyler]

I loved the movie.
I'm going to see it again tomorrow.

the poem, it's all very surreal.

[Katie Louise Hughes]

I haven't seen the movie yet, but I like this poem. Your imagination shines in this! I hope the movie was great! Thanks and keep up the writing! :D

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. The movie does seem like it is going to be good. Like the poem as always. Good job. Thanks for sharing. :)

[brianna vega]

love it

[AdrenalineDrug]

Wow, this was amazing. You write very well. I loved every line!