Upon sight I could see right through this picture. I can see someone who finally comes home to find it gone, vanished. I hope you guys like this one, and the music is just so awesome. The music adds a new element to the picture and the poem.
Picture by: http://latoday.deviantart.com/
Music: Assassin's Creed 2 - Ezio Family
What drew me to this poem was the picture you have. It reminds me heavily out of Matthew McCormack's film The Road; the darkened skies, smoke, and the sheer vastness of hopeless and isolation that is portrayed. My favourite line in this poem is: "Here I walk in the midst of your shadow
tears engulfed in flaming smoke" You have a great way with expressing yourself through poetry and it works very, very well. Thank you very much for sharing
My style of writing poetry is a little different. My poems mostly inspired by photography, and music. A picture is worth a thousand words and I love find the words within the photo.
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